run and leave

February 10, 2010
By adristar96 SILVER, Miami, Florida
adristar96 SILVER, Miami, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolate, You'll never know what your gonna get. :) Forest Gump


This life isn't what i planned it to be.
Why did you have to run and leave.
baby, I miss you so dearly.
Why can't you hear me clearly.
You ripped my heart, you tore it and ripped it apart.
All the memories we shared makes me feel that you never cared.

Sweetheart, can't you hear me cry?
You probably don't even try.
Why do I blame myself for you leaving.
I didn't break your feelings.

All this pain inside me,
runs through my veins so violently.


The author's comments:
Its not your basic song because I didn't finish it. Made: 5/27/09 If you'd like you can give me suggestions and/or lyrics (don't worry i'll credit you, if i decide to use them) but maybe i wont i dont want to get in trouble lol

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on Apr. 10 2010 at 5:14 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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i would love to give you sugestions but i cant because i cant feel what this is about or anything in lyrics for them to be good you have to feel it as you write it. this is good but you have to finish it no one else can. =)


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