Tear drop puddles

February 18, 2010
By Anonymous

My tear drop puddles
Yeah, no
(Verse one)
howling tears left a puddle in my heart, believe,
Tear drops still soaking in the past, present lingering up to the future and it’s still a part of me
Nope, it don’t need to get where I’m going, I got to get where I’m going so I won’t again slip in my own flood, take off my spectacles to see, you’re the only one that I ever need, but you threw it all away with my tear drops that now reveal,
Caused me so much pain
Where I’m departing no more I need any pain! Don’t need to see you the same! The humiliation caused me so much fame… And now I’m drowning too…
The wicked you must too drown and go! Ooooh! Cause this entity is no longer sinking no more! Ooooh
(Chorus)I just want to push you in my puddle of tears so I won’t have to drown alone…End you and you know the puddles were just made by you… A drop of my tear puddle drops the tears I dropped…
(Verse two)
The puddles seems deep, but baby you know, it didn’t have to be, below temperature now you can’t even breathe, struggling in the puddle to breathe, struggling in the puddle to breathe and now for us to be, it’s hard for you you been to blinded to see, I didn’t do it you irrigate my eye sockets for me! Now I’m drowning fast baby, caused me so much pain, where I’m going no more I need any pain! Don’t need to see you the same! Your shame caused me so much fame! And now I’m drowning too!
(Verse three)
Hey you were murdering you! Including me! We were one in a million, yeah…

The author's comments:
crying too much

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on Apr. 7 2011 at 5:03 pm
kirstie_terry GOLD, Douglasville, Georgia
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Thanks Alot =) I was facing some true pain when I wrote this so i wanted the reader to feel my emotion of what i was going through too, again thanks.

on Jan. 31 2011 at 4:24 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
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Whoa...this is way deep. I absolutely love this. It has a darker edge to it, kind of like an Evanescence song. I can feel the emotion in this. It was actually pretty evocative for me, because I went through a period where I was constantly crying too so I feel your pain.

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on Jan. 9 2011 at 7:02 pm
limelove, Gresham, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
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This was so deep

on May. 12 2010 at 8:06 pm
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
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Love Always. :)
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This is really good! You have great rythum, beat, and flow. Impressive! Check out some of my work?

on Feb. 23 2010 at 2:38 pm
kissingdarkness SILVER, Mill Creek, Oklahoma
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this is great i love it!!!

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on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:13 am
ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
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This is wow, you made me feel and picture this so clearly!


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