"Smile Empty Soul"

February 8, 2010
By rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance


Smile empty soul
dark and devoid
Close your eyes
and try to avoid
the hell ahead
and the pain behind
You know
you have nowhere to hide
but you go ahead and try.
No cry shall pass your lips
Nor tear fall from your eyes
Your love is not real
and your faith is all lies.
Deaf from hearing
Blind from seeing
You can’t take this anymore
But what choice do you have?
So let the blood pour.
No one really loves you
and no one ever will.
So stop your crying
You’ve had your fill.
Smile empty soul
Lay down and die.


The author's comments:
I love the phrase "Smile Empty Soul", so I wrote a depressed song using it. And no, it has nothing to do with the band Smile Empty Soul.

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on Jun. 2 2010 at 3:29 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

That's what Lauren said... I will work on a happy song, just for y'all.

on May. 6 2010 at 8:02 pm
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty

you should write some happy stuff :P u know, like unicorns and butterflies, as mr, a would say. jk. i like this.

on Mar. 16 2010 at 4:07 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

Thanks!

Yeah, I plan on it. I have other songs and stuff too.

Ok, I"ll check your work out. :)

Milo! said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 4:03 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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