Hold your breathe

February 5, 2010
By CarlyDudek PLATINUM, Ft. Wayne, Indiana
CarlyDudek PLATINUM, Ft. Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is when your heart stop beating because of the electric shock you get from a simple smile. Love is no consequences, love is not caring what people think, love is feeling alive and living for him/her, love is when you kno your complete


Birds sing
In sunlight we all know
And fish swim
In waters and such
The sky’s blue
And grass is green
It’s the beginning of a brand new day

A new day
A new chance to get along
A new year
A new chance to sing your song
A single breathe
And everything disappears
So let’s hold our breathe
And stay here.

Let’s stay here
I don’t want to go away.
I love it here.
It’s much better this way.
The old world
Is just so normal it’s strange
But this world
Is so magical

It’s so magical
It’s worth holding my breathe
As I try to persuade you
To stay
It may seem strange at first
But most thing do
If you breathe once
It will go away

Please don’t let it go away
Please hold you breathe
Please don’t ruin this for me
I know I’m being selfish
But I have the right to
You’ve been selfish too
This is just my chance
I can’t and won’t let this go away
It’s just so amazing

This is amazing.
The best that’s ever happened
I apologize for putting you through this
But you can learn to enjoy it
Sit by the springs
Or relax in the rain
The clearing is just ahead of us
I must be insane.

Is it just me?
Or is this getting old
All the magic
Is to much to take a hold
Of reality
Growing boring
My energy is running out
I have to take a breathe soon
Or I will never get out.

This is starting to tire me
The real world is always changing
This place just stays static
Stationary, I you will
It always stays still
I need to find my way back to reality
I try to take a breathe but I cannot
I try to find you but
You already took your breathe long ago



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on Feb. 16 2010 at 9:21 pm
CarlyDudek PLATINUM, Ft. Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is when your heart stop beating because of the electric shock you get from a simple smile. Love is no consequences, love is not caring what people think, love is feeling alive and living for him/her, love is when you kno your complete

thank you!

on Feb. 16 2010 at 9:16 pm
nicdal85 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Be kind to everyone you meet, because you never know what people are going through"
-im not sure, i'll find out=)

this is really amazing

keep writing!


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