Nothing but a Player

February 2, 2010
By WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.


I'm older and wiser
Now I see what I did wrong
I'm hurting and crying
That's why I'm singing this song
I gave you my trust but you betrayed it
You didn't do your part
You're nothing but a player
Who broke my heart

The author's comments:
This song is for all you girls out there who have been cheated on, lied to, or forced to take a relationship too fast like I was. I'm sorry you all had to be put through that.

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on Oct. 14 2010 at 4:12 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Thanks, that was the idea for this poem, to make it short, sweet and to the point, but fit a lot of emotion into it at the same time. I'm so glad you like it! :)

on Oct. 13 2010 at 5:36 am
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 414 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

i like this. its short and sweet, but delivers a great emssage that most people can relate to(:

on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:49 pm
beautifuldisaster18, Arlington, Texas
0 articles 1 photo 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep your feet on the ground, When your head's in the clouds.

I definitely know I can relate to this!

on Jul. 26 2010 at 1:22 am
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Thanks, I'm glad you like this poem and I'm glad you have never been in a situation like the one the poem describes. I was so naive back then and I feel so stupid now for falling for the school player and I wish so much that I could take everything back. But we learn from our mistakes and I know I'll never make this same mistake again. And I wish you all the happiness in your new relationship. :)

on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:27 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

I really like the honesty and truth behind this. And obviously i bet MANY people can relate to it. I don't happen to be one of them (thankfully), and i hope i never am. But i feel as though it will eventually happen to us all....sadly. I just entered into a relationship and i am very happy and thankful:) we have liked eachother A VERY LOT, for over three years now, and now we're together. i hope everything works out as well as it has been and that it never comes to this. i really appriciate the poem and what it symbolizes to many women and how we are treated and let down. good job!

on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:45 am
alenkaaa BRONZE, Battle Ground, Washington
2 articles 2 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm falling apart, I'm barely breathing. With a broken heart. Thats still beating...

This is really good!! Good Job!

on Jul. 10 2010 at 3:45 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

This is awesome !Many girls can relate to this , this is VERY true . keep it up

on Jul. 5 2010 at 6:48 pm
just-a-joy GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
12 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eminem: Success is my only option, failure's not

tanx i because some times i dont thinkguys know how it feel

on Jun. 14 2010 at 7:10 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it. I really appreciate the feedback. Feel free to check out some of my other work and comment those too. :)

on Jun. 14 2010 at 6:47 pm
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people.
-Eleanor Roosevelt

I think, at a child's birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

I really really love how short and truly to the point. it's written so well, you delivered the message in only a few meaningful lines

on Jun. 14 2010 at 5:37 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Thank you.

on Jun. 14 2010 at 12:06 am
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people.
-Eleanor Roosevelt

I think, at a child's birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

very pretty :)

Milo! said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 9:03 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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