Ask Around Town, Baby.

January 27, 2010
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Let's do this, baby.
Go ahead and ask around.
'Cause I'm a king, baby.
One of four in the town.

Girls are a dime a dozen,
They said I've kissed hundreds.
I find it funny, one; she was my cousin.
But I deny all claims,
'Cause it's a claim to fame.
I'm not looking for the A-list life,
But baby that's my game.

So you ask my name?
Just go and ask around.
It's coming, baby.
A moth draws to the flame.





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MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 8:34 pm
amazing lol
 
ElijahNoble replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 11:40 pm
thanks. the rest of my writing is much more serious and great, imo. try those out and i'll read yours.
 
once_a_redhead replied...
May 31, 2010 at 7:11 am
i love it!!! minds me of my friend joey!!!:)
 
Powd3er said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 11:07 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
 
XenonGThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 2:35 pm
haha thats cute :)
 
ElijahNoble replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 9:50 pm
thanks haha. when r u gonna post more?
 
XenonGThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 1:42 pm
soon.....i've been wicked busy but now i'm on vacation so YAY!!!! lol
 
ElijahNoble replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 1:57 pm
awesome! but vacation? school vacation?
 
XenonGThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 10:21 am
yeah school vacation
 
ElijahNoble replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 8:17 pm
ok. check out my new poems.
 
XenonGThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 8:30 am
ok i will :)
 
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