Iron River

January 24, 2010
By Birmele63 SILVER, Naples, Florida
Birmele63 SILVER, Naples, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
why not?

Ripple the smooth current of the Iron River
As the land resists the shriek of the sinner
Admirer the iron as it gushes on shore
While the land feels sudden faint too deep in its core
The river runs dry as the land slowly fades
Gasping for one last breath to savor the day
The land watches the river crust upon shore
It lifts its head and for eternity smiles once more
The land's soul is now desolate, jaded sinner
All because no one cared about the land and the Iron River

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Milo! said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 9:32 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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