Maria

January 22, 2010
By AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
7 articles 10 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have such a unique way with words"









-Mrs. Peterson


Sleep til morning
so i can hold u tight
lieing beside u
might i no denie
i love u til the morning light shines thro

Marie o Maria
u my sweet heart
hugs loves til morning
for happy days to come

i love u dear
so sleep so near
hold tight til morning safe
inside my arms i have u in my heart
til dawns sweet heart

Happy days my love
for u can see thro my heart

u r my life my dawn
n night ooooooo

sleep my sweet heart
thro ur troubles dawn
for ill take care of you

if you do 1 sweet thing
for me just take a deep breath
take a trip to sweet dreams
where im round to keep u safe

an u can have
all u want
alll I want is u
so take my hand
i'll guide u thro

The author's comments:
this a piece that can explains a person's love and caring for another

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on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:43 pm
AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
7 articles 10 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have such a unique way with words"









-Mrs. Peterson

thank you lol i didnt really try to make it realtable but it was nice it turned out that way. I'll try to write more

on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:42 pm
AQuietPerson SILVER, Columbus, Pennsylvania
7 articles 10 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have such a unique way with words"









-Mrs. Peterson

i agree i thought it would be a nice point of view switch thank you for the comment :D

on Jul. 1 2010 at 3:06 pm
roxymutt BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
4 articles 5 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see. -David Henry Thoreau

this is adorable...its so cute how its written from the mans perspective because they always try to be so mach and this is just like im showing you how i truely feel ah! great job

Milo! said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 9:47 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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