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close my eyes...to suffice
the failure that i feel in my heart
i feel the pain..as i see ther rain
how could the wrong be on my part??

and i know.that it is startin to show
the sorrows that are not meant to be
theres a chill in my spine..that feels so divine
and i know it should be me!!!

i had it all...and i felt it fall
the things that i thought i would become
the differnt stars...reaching them was a war
but now to my pain i succumb

and i know its startin to show
the sorrows that are not meant to be
theres a chill through my spine...that feels so divine
and i know that it should be me!!!

yeah...i am flyin with the air
now that i realize
that nothing is out of my hands
failure does come
comes to every one
and thats how come the great minds

theres a chill through my spine that feels so divine
and i know that it should be me!!!

and so i close my eyes...to suffice
the elation that soars now my mind!!!:)))



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LAVAN said...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 5:49 am:
NICE MESS..I THINK A LOVE FEELER WIL WRITE SUCH A MARVELOUS PIECE...IF ANY just send it to lk_lavan@yahoo .com
 
yogita replied...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 11:06 am :
thankyou for your comment. m glad u liked it!
 
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fairy said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 1:01 pm:
its a thought provoking, deeply experienced piece of delight.
 
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