To Lose You

A wave of sadness
Flows through me
I have lost all of you
Took me this long to see
You're so far gone
I can't even believe
The things that happened
And who you've come to be
Oh this is such a shame
To have you leave
I guess you'll never know
What you really mean to me





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keilly said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 7:25 am
i think it was very good but if it was a song i think it should be a little longer to have a climax and a resolution.
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:38 pm
Thanks. This lyric is made for an acoustic type folk song...with many parts that consist of more intrumental rather than lyrical.
 
Saphira96 said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 5:08 pm
That was amazing! It made me feel emotional!
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:40 pm
I really appreciate your encouraging comments! It's been a delight to hear what you think of my work :)
 
Saphira96 replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 6:41 pm
Your very welcome! i love to help people and it was a pleasure!
 
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