To Lose You

January 6, 2010
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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A wave of sadness
Flows through me
I have lost all of you
Took me this long to see
You're so far gone
I can't even believe
The things that happened
And who you've come to be
Oh this is such a shame
To have you leave
I guess you'll never know
What you really mean to me


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on Mar. 10 2010 at 6:41 pm
Saphira96 SILVER, Crestwood, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
I have 3 but here they are:
Truly Great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget.
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take your breath away. And the only problem is time.

Your very welcome! i love to help people and it was a pleasure!

on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:40 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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I really appreciate your encouraging comments! It's been a delight to hear what you think of my work :)

on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:38 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thanks. This lyric is made for an acoustic type folk song...with many parts that consist of more intrumental rather than lyrical.

keilly GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 7:25 am
keilly GOLD, Springfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
there is always a rason for things

i think it was very good but if it was a song i think it should be a little longer to have a climax and a resolution.

on Mar. 6 2010 at 5:08 pm
Saphira96 SILVER, Crestwood, Kentucky
5 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have 3 but here they are:
Truly Great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget.
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take your breath away. And the only problem is time.

That was amazing! It made me feel emotional!


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