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A fragile beauty, elegant
as the 4000 year tree stands tall.
I love you, you love me not,
Less adored, must I leave before I fall?

Handpicked by angels - you leave,
Thus your presence flares and dies.
Unnerved by this sudden darkness
I Iove you, yet you tell me lies.

Deaths cavern invites me closer
Whilst I listen to you in despair
You say this earth needs better men
I love you- don't you care!?

'each leaf deserves a grave' you said
Jims story touched your heart,
Yet you stamp me to the sidewalk
Still I love, while you tear my heart apart




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midnight_compositions said...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 7:08 pm:
this was really original, I liked it. Kudos for writing a song about love that really stands out as unique. Have you written music for it?
 
ephemeral_dream replied...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 3:20 pm :
hiya, thanks for the comment, no i haven't written music for it...would like to though :/ x
 
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eglantine said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 7:59 pm:
really beautiful
 
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