Does It?

does it hurt to know you lost me forever?
does it sting to know there will never be another?
does it kill to realize you didn't win?
come on boy I know it does, just give in
I know it hurts, I know it stings
but I think you deserve it for doing those horrible things.





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_AMZ_ said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 6:53 pm
ouch........
 
Jellybean9898 said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 4:12 pm
Kelly Clarkson's cool.  and i think this poem is just BAM in the face for that boy in the poem.  it's cool, and it makes the girl telling the boy those things Miss INDEPENDENT.  nice job 
 
StandardToaster replied...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 7:40 pm
i know it's u, nisha!  thanks 4 the feedback tho!
 
hyperactivemayfly This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 6:22 pm
I love that song. Nice pic, by the way. And a major pwnage poem. (fyi: pwn=awesome-ish.)
 
KonyaB!!! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 12:10 pm
This would make a really good song...I love Kelly Clarkson.
Can you check out my work? :)
p.s. The picture's freaky, totally fits. ;)
 
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