We're Fading

December 12, 2009
By xxxack BRONZE, Haymaket, Virginia
xxxack BRONZE, Haymaket, Virginia
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the light, is fading
the darkness, overtaking
our hearts, are breaking
my mind, is craving

your sight,
is saving

our love, is fading
the distance, overtaking
our hearts, are craving
each others sight
is saving

bittersweet memories
cloud my mind
a flat hearbeat,
slows down, the time
days pass, but i cant forget

our love, was flying
the distance, was dying
our hearts were flooding
our minds
making, a slot, of time
i cant, describe

our love, is fading
im hardly, bre--athing
the distance,is taking, our hearts
are craving, each others sight

bittersweet, memories
cloud my mind
a flat hearbeat,
slows down, the time
days pass, but i just cant forget,

will you save me tonight?
will you hold me tonight?
baby will you love me, tonight?
(tonight, tonight)
will you love me
'cause ill love you, til the end of time

so many days have come to pass, but i just cant forget
those bittersweet memories
theyre still clouding my mind
and that flat heartbeat is still slowing down the time

but ill still love you baby, til the end of time

The author's comments:
I wrote this about a month after my girlfriend broke up with me. We had an amazing relationship, and then for no reason at all, it just ended.I didn't really know what to think about it, so i just wrote.

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Milo! said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 8:46 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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