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I am so embedded in love
Fallin’ off top of the mount
Like sticky elephants in the mud
I can’t get out
He’s draggin’ me in
He’s pullin’ me under
I am sinkin’ and
My heart’s like the thunder
It’s love

I hunger for kisses that we did before
Your mouth like peppermint
You’re so delicious I want more
Can’t you take a hint?
My heart’s burnin’ fire
It’s drippin’ for its lover
My heart’s not a liar
True like its mother’s
For you
For youuuuu….

Let’s go to the ballroom
My heart’s already dancing
I smell your cologne fumes
It’s definitely enhancing
Our togetherness in love…

Our togetherness
Our true happiness
Our wonderful

beautiful

lovely

drowning in the same water
It makes all the difference
Holding each other until
The end




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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 5:11 pm:

i really like this one!! my fav part are the two lines:

Let's go to the ballroom

My heart's already dancing- i really like that great job!!

 
kiwi12 replied...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 9:06 pm :
thank you, those are my favorite too.
 
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Bethani said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 8:22 pm:
Wow! This is powerful and so true and descriptive! Keep it up!
 
kiwi12 replied...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 7:00 pm :
thanks for seeing that!
 
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