What People in Love Feel Like

December 17, 2009
By kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments

I am so embedded in love
Fallin’ off top of the mount
Like sticky elephants in the mud
I can’t get out
He’s draggin’ me in
He’s pullin’ me under
I am sinkin’ and
My heart’s like the thunder
It’s love

I hunger for kisses that we did before
Your mouth like peppermint
You’re so delicious I want more
Can’t you take a hint?
My heart’s burnin’ fire
It’s drippin’ for its lover
My heart’s not a liar
True like its mother’s
For you
For youuuuu….

Let’s go to the ballroom
My heart’s already dancing
I smell your cologne fumes
It’s definitely enhancing
Our togetherness in love…

Our togetherness
Our true happiness
Our wonderful

beautiful

lovely

drowning in the same water
It makes all the difference
Holding each other until
The end



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on Aug. 15 2010 at 9:06 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
thank you, those are my favorite too.

on Aug. 15 2010 at 5:11 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

i really like this one!! my fav part are the two lines:

Let's go to the ballroom

My heart's already dancing- i really like that great job!!


on Jan. 12 2010 at 7:00 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
thanks for seeing that!

Bethani GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 8:22 pm
Bethani GOLD, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
10 articles 0 photos 508 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is perfect until you sit back and realize how boring it is without risks.

Wow! This is powerful and so true and descriptive! Keep it up!


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