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Trusting You

December 9, 2009
By Michelina BRONZE, Londonderry, New Hampshire
Michelina BRONZE, Londonderry, New Hampshire
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Done.
What is it that made me trust you
That made me think
That you really cared
That made me believe that you were there
Trusting you
Was like leaning on a wall
That wasn’t really there
Like wishing on a falling star
That was a landing plane
I never realized
That you were so mean
“Go away” way to make a scene
You and your stupid girlfriend
You nearly broke me in two
Trusting you
Was like finding a palm tree
In the middle of a desert
Like finding two of the
Same snowflakes
A disappointment.
This isn’t the first time
You lost a great friend
I’m sorry, but this time
I can’t forgive you
Trusting you
Hurts too much.


The author's comments:
I liked one of my closer friends for sooo long, and then I realized that when he was with his friends he was so mean to me. Then we'd be online and he'd be nice. It hurt, but I knew he couldn't have it both ways. I was either his friend or I wasn't, so I wrote this song with my decision.

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on Dec. 30 2009 at 1:45 pm
luv22skittles SILVER, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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I like it alot! epically the analogies you use to explain to the reader what you mean. i totally understood.

Lonleydandy said...
on Dec. 28 2009 at 7:11 pm
You're welcome!

on Dec. 28 2009 at 5:40 pm
Michelina BRONZE, Londonderry, New Hampshire
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thanks so much(:

Lonleydandy said...
on Dec. 28 2009 at 4:45 pm
I love this....love it love love it