Where I stand..

November 3, 2009
By Breee GOLD, Salina, Kansas
Breee GOLD, Salina, Kansas
10 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you really love someone, you shouldnt have to work at it."
-Vanessa Hudgens

And I don't know what to do,
when I'm so done with you.
Where I stand I say good-bye.
Please take it, don't ask why.

I wanna keep it that way.
today I make a change.
I know I'll be okay.
Why should I remain
when you make me insane?

You we're what you made me feel,
I thought you gave me something real.
This feeling was strong,
I thought nothing could go wrong.
And I don't know what to do,
When I'm so done with you.
Where I stand i say good-bye
please take it, don't ask why.

You'll never be a regret,
and ill keep all our secrets.
Our times we're a blast
but this is my last.

I was never lonely
thinking you were my only.
You are now my past,
to our times I'll hold fast.

The author's comments:
I made this in a writing workshop, i think its good as like a free verse poem but not as song lyrics. But give me your thoughts on this i'd like to hear them (:

cOMmenT PleaSE!! ?

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