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decisions, decisions
heads colliding caused a collision
nevr deciding thr right road
and a whole boat load
load of thoughts that collide
tearing me apart and into my mind
between the truth and you
i guess i will never have a dream come true?





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OBLA-DI, OBLA-DA :) said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 1:27 pm
I really enjoyed your thoughts. One thing I love about reading poetry is looking beyond the words and seeing what they mean to you. I can relate to your thoughts and words. NICE JOB!
 
Lonleydandy said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 8:41 pm
It is very nice!!! I really like it!
 
Audriana S. replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 9:27 pm
thanxx for everybody reading this poem
 
sweetNsour said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 1:28 pm
Great poem, short but extremely breath-taking, keep up the good writing =]
 
sweetNsour replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 11:38 am
I don't understand what you mean? how isn't it positive?
 
Tamara replied...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 2:55 pm
ya i dont get that how was that comment negative????
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 8:42 pm
I don't really get how their comment wasn't positive either.....
 
Tamara replied...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 1:36 pm
ya i know its really weird lol
 
sweetNsour replied...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 2:38 pm
wow................................................. =] lol
 
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