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boderline of destruction

October 25, 2009
By ChrisAMoore PLATINUM, Saint Augustine, Florida
ChrisAMoore PLATINUM, Saint Augustine, Florida
24 articles 8 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hey guys I have old work on this profile, but I stopped for about two years now. I got back into it now because I found that art and expression is me. So I hope you like the things I post from now on more lol

You came to me (and)
Said we need to talk
Then suddenly my heart stopped

I began to remember
When you said don’t worry
It’ll last forever

We’ll get through this
No matter what
Then you gave me a kiss

What have I done?
Now I feel like I’m on
The borderline of destruction

I don’t know
But if you do this
I won’t know where to go

It’s like walking through a battlefield
Our life lashes between you eyes

It’s been 2 days now that I’m wondering
Just please, you’re my life

If you say no and it’s over
Then I ill die for you
And I’ll use my last breath
To say I love you

The author's comments:
<3 C.o.

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on Jan. 31 2010 at 4:43 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

i know exactly how you feel, great poem, loved it!

twiwrite GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 2:52 pm
twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
14 articles 0 photos 111 comments

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none :P

oh my gosh iv been there. its kinda chilling to think about that time, even as its happening again.

wonderful poem!

on Jan. 10 2010 at 6:52 pm
Jack_Walton SILVER, Gray, Tennessee
6 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
In a mad world, only the mad are sane. - Akira Kurosawa

Well, this is good. Not what I was expecting with a title like 'Borderline of Destruction', but I still thought it conveyed the sense of love very well. Great job!

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 8:50 pm
SOOOO SWEET!!!!!!!!! And honestly, I only say that when I mean it. It was really cute. Keep writing!!!!

on Nov. 11 2009 at 4:04 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

Awh!!!!!! That is adorable, i wish some guy loved me as much as you love her, this is so so so good :) keep writing, your good at it

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