This Wall

October 26, 2009
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I feel so traped inside,
This wall I hide behind,
This wall that I've created,
Out of all the things I've hated,

After all the pain I've taken,
Its no surprize I'm breakin,..."down"
For the first time,
In a long time,
v1: I think I'll have a cry,
Because on the inside,
I think I'm starting to die,
I need to escape, from the place that I break,
v2: So many people I've blamed,
For always feeling shamed,
And I've always been chained,
By all the hate and pain,
v3: I wish I could remember,
All the *** thats takin over,..."me"
I wish that I could see,
That this wall is takin over me,
v4: This wall was once a shield,
From all the things that make me feel,
But now I cant escape,
From this prizon I create,
v5: This wall does not protect me,
From all the *** I thought would hurt you see,
I built my wall to with stand,
Any feat of man, including my escapeing,
But inside this wall I'm breaking,..."down"

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midnight_compositions said...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 8:08 pm
kudos for being original :)
uncaring-unknowing-unthinkingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 8:47 pm
boring jk i know your pain i tryed to help you out of it
Tamara said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 3:06 pm
i think its amazing i can almost feel ur pain keep writing
Hallow said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 10:59 am
I'm sorry. I am a really picky person, and the grammatical errors are really too distracting for me to gain any real meaning from the song.
Tamara replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 3:05 pm
im sorry but thats really rude and if u were a real artist u would look past that
dreamer9492 said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 5:18 pm
Very good. i liked it alot when i was reading it i had a beat in my head lol if i was an artist i would buy this song form you!
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