Gone.

October 21, 2009
The bright white walls
Enclosing on us
We realize that
You're no longer here

Dizziness and nausea
Doesn't compare to
All that we feel
Now that you are gone

The empty void
Blank pages in which
We fill with thoughts
With you still alive

Dark clouds come in
Don't know where from
Droplets pour down
We are quenched with loss





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DHgirl said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 10:47 pm
that is g8 lov it. plz check out my stuff  thx u
 
kujo96 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 1:52 pm
very good i think tht should be in the magizine
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:24 pm
Aww thanks! That's really sweet :)
 
Saphira96 said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 5:15 pm
That was really good! It reminded me of a episode from my favorite show!
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:21 pm
Thank you! Oh neat, what show?
 
Saphira96 replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 6:48 pm
Your welcome! It reminds of a episode from the show Doctor Who! It's a sci-fi show with a love story and they get trapped from each other when all they want to do is be with each other! Its really good! i love it!
 
~Reaa.Mae~ said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 11:30 am
It was awesome :) <3 Nice work.
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:19 pm
Thanks so much :)
 
Dolllike said...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 5:29 pm
I really liked it!!!
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:18 pm
Thanks so much :)
 
Katie[: said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 9:16 am
Wow that is really good.
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 2:49 am
Thank you!
 
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