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Take My Hand

October 20, 2009
By lucybugg101 PLATINUM, Concord, New Hampshire
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“Be yourself, don't take anyone's shit, and never let them take you alive.” -Gerard Way

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Would you take my hand,
Lead me through the darkness,
Maybe follow through,
And take me back,
To where I used to be,
All those better times,
And better people,
What would they say to me?
If they saw what I've become;
I'm just an outcast,
A loner outcast,
Of course you don't care.

© Cassie H., Carmi, IL

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caseyG said...
on Oct. 3 2010 at 12:04 pm
amazingly deep and really touches the heart.
Ms.Understood said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 2:33 pm
Ms.Understood, Laramie, Wyoming
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That would give it a boost.
Moonlight BRONZE said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 8:33 pm
Moonlight BRONZE, Heiskell, Tennessee
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"The boundaries which divide life from death
are at best shadowy and vague.
Who shall say where one ends,
and the other begins?"
Edgar Allan Poe

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Haha me again. I really like this one. I think there could be more to it though. Maybe something like: I'm nothing more then a memory of the old me; A shadow of that happy child. Just a suggestion but your piece is still good.