Take My Hand

October 20, 2009
Would you take my hand,
Lead me through the darkness,
Maybe follow through,
And take me back,
To where I used to be,
All those better times,
And better people,
What would they say to me?
If they saw what I've become;
I'm just an outcast,
A loner outcast,
Of course you don't care.

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caseyG said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 12:04 pm
amazingly deep and really touches the heart.
PurpleMoonlight said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 8:33 pm
Haha me again. I really like this one. I think there could be more to it though. Maybe something like: I'm nothing more then a memory of the old me; A shadow of that happy child. Just a suggestion but your piece is still good.
unfamil-LIAR-minds replied...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 2:33 pm
That would give it a boost.
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