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Hidden Love

Rose petals everywhere,
A single flower
He placed in her hair,
It was he,
The love of her life,
Who she wanted to be with all the time,
Day light,
Or dark night,
She knew he was the one,
Loved him more than life itself,
His bright, blue eyes and perfect, pearly smile
Made her want to melt,
He wasn’t perfect but he was close,
Yet she couldn’t tell him how she felt,

As he placed a flower in her hair,
He looked in her eyes,
And knew that love was there,
He watched her flash a flirty smile, and blush at his kind gesture,
He knew she was the one,
For it wasn’t her looks that he treasured,
It was her heart,
That he would always remember.

They looked at each other with such passion,
They admitted their hidden love,
Relived they both fell the same.
Impossible to separate,
Each others soul mate,

Next thing you know,
Rose petals, are spread once again,
This time along a silk white isle,
She walked to her love,
Once again she flashed a flirty smile,
He thought to himself “I'm the luckiest man,”
They, said I dos,
And exchanged rings hand to hand,
Heart to heart,
Lip to lip.
Before they knew it they became parents,
Prayed for a chance for him to find love like theirs,
To think it all started with a flower in her hair.



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Nessa13 said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 3:11 pm
You are an amazing song writer!! Please tell me you can sing!! lol That would b an amazing song! If you can't sing, then find someone that can!!! I would love to hear that song on the radio!!
 
njlejla said...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 3:32 pm
This was amazing and it was really about love at first sight
 
JamieStarr said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 2:06 am
this was very sweet i loved i hope you are a good singer because this song would be a number one hit :)
 
lexi said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 8:19 pm
oh my gosh i am breathless seriously!!! so hope that you become a singer one day cuz you wright awsome songs!!!!!!!!
 
mallory14 said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 6:23 pm
this is so beautiful ....I love it ....its so full of smitten and sweet:)
 
BMMSVJ said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:24 am
THIS POEM IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND HEART WARMING
 
megarie said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 8:25 am
wow. that is so beatiful.
 
cheyfla said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 7:17 am
wow that was amazing i really loved it.
 
PeaveLoveMe(: said...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 1:16 pm
OMG this is exactly how i feel about my like best friend!!! i just hope our lives turn out the way your poem did!
 
Lonleydandy said...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 7:58 am
This is really sweet! I love it!!!!
 
Drama_Queen13 said...
Dec. 25, 2009 at 8:54 pm
Wow! That was absoulutly beautiful! I loved every minute of it! Can you please read my story? The first chapter is Our Summer-Chapter 1-Summer Wish. Its about a summer romance between two teenage kids that ends in tradgey
 
PeaceLoveDance321 replied...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 12:42 am
Thank you I really appreciate it. I would e more than happy to check out your article.
 
LeilaniLives said...
Dec. 2, 2009 at 5:03 pm
Ahh, yes. I loved this song. You should check out mine as well. It's the top under recently submitted today and tomorrow it will be #1 under Top Voted. Congrats at recieving 4th, I believe you should be second at least.
 
PeaceLoveDance321 replied...
Dec. 2, 2009 at 6:47 pm
thank you so much, I will definatly check yours out, thats so great. Thank you, maybe another time I'll get a higher ranking.
 
JonasLover89 said...
Oct. 27, 2009 at 3:58 pm
Beautiful!!! Very deep and gentle!
PS: Read the rest of my stories!
 
PeaceLoveDance96 replied...
Oct. 27, 2009 at 4:00 pm
thanks.!
i will do that.
 
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