Broken

October 16, 2009
By dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"


My heart is broken,
no one understands just how I feel and what I'm going through right now my first love said "We're through! I found anouther girl so this is good-bye______ I still want to be friends and I'll always love you,but just as a friend." Right then I started to cry. My heart was broken,how could he do that to me and just forget that I even exsist. He doesn't e-mail me,call me, or even talk to me when I see him. One day he finnaly did walk up to me and he said "This won't work.I never want to see you again,we can't evan be friends______." My heat just broke, and it's not fixable I'll always have a part of me missing_____ but I just have to continue life and try forget about him,no matter how much i love him,because my heart is broken,I just have to continue life even though my heart is broken.


The author's comments:
This is something I wrote because I love to write songs about how I feel and me and I was feeling sad and unloved so I wrote this.Comment,good or bad,rate, tell me what you think!

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on Oct. 27 2009 at 12:38 pm
*Babygurl22* GOLD, Warsaw, Illinois
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I LOVE THE COLOR ORANGE!!!!!!!!!! Love y'all...

yea. np.lol.................

on Oct. 22 2009 at 2:25 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

Thanks! and Your welcome!,LOL ! =)

on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:13 am
*Babygurl22* GOLD, Warsaw, Illinois
12 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
I LOVE THE COLOR ORANGE!!!!!!!!!! Love y'all...

this is very good. And thank you for the comments on my stories!!!!!!!


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