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No one was watching and no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway
and everyone could see as she stepped out of the car
that she hit just a little too too hard

the girls in the back were crying out they're dying
their bodies meshed with the car
you could tell they were hit just a little too too hard

so many dying
so many crying
no one was watching
no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway

I remember the day like it was yesterday
I can hear the squeal of the tires
and the ghost of the screams
the crying out loud
the bust of the seams
they all went flying flying
so high on life but they were dying dying

so many dying
so many crying
no one was watching
no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway

and everyone could see as she stepped out of the car
that she hit just a little too too hard
but what does it matter anyway

the rain poured down
as the night crept in
they closed their eyes for the final time
making a wish and holding each other tight
but what does it matter anyway

so many dying
so many crying
no one was watching
no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway




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CaitlynCase said...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 8:38 am:
awee :(
 
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Nessa13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 8:26 am:
This piece was amazing! It has so much hurt, heart, sadness, and love in it! I am SSSSOOOOO sorry about your friend! May she rest in peace
 
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kate12345meThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 2:33 am:
I tried to work out a random tune to this - that's how well-written it was. I think this was less about the actual accident and more about losing her. I know how it feels when someone 'goes away' and this was very heart-wrenching. From, a deeply affected 13-year-old. P.S. May she Rest In Peace. xo
 
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magickMuse said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 3:24 pm:
i loved this piece my friend died in a car accident and i get it. your work is amazing everything was right on
 
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summermarrie said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 6:00 pm:

bout ur lost ilove this it touched myy heart

 

 
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horselove146 said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 11:39 am:
Wow, that's great..  &'d so sad..  Sorry for your loss.
 
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ForeverBlondie7 said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 7:25 pm:
This is such a beautiful peice! I loved reading it! Im very sorry about your friend, and i kno what she would be very proud of you for writing such an amazing piece like this one! keep on writing
 
♥USCgirl♥ replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 8:08 am :
Wow I know how you feel! One of my good friends died in a car crash and it was terrible! This is an amazing piece!
 
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hellogirl said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 10:42 am:
Omg! Im really, really sorry about ur loss it must be sad for you to have gone thrue this for a best friend and for the poem it is a sad one but I can see that it has a meaning and that you expressed urself.
 
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mimirocks124 said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 9:07 am:
wow relly personal. sorry about ur loss
 
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Cajsim said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 3:29 pm:

Wow... Im sorry for your loss, I liked the chorus and the emphasis.

Check out some of my songs and see what you think?

 
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WSRA said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 8:21 am:
This was sad and touching!!!
 
ArrowHeart replied...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 10:27 pm :
I had to sing this song, but while I did, I cried.
 
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Mr.Mills said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 8:09 am:

Hey thats sad it must of took a lot of heart to right that and i truly am sorry for your lost.

 

 
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JustBreathe said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 7:25 pm:
It made me cry.  it actually did.  i'm still crying.  IT WAS SO WELL WRITEN.
 
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Shahed said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 8:25 pm:

It was deep, and so sad!! I am so sorry for your lost! I know how its like when you lose a very close person.. Im sorry..

 

Check out my work

 
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Shadows said...
May 7, 2010 at 9:23 pm:
It was very deep and I could feel your loss.
 
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Jesus Lover said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 9:21 am:
Wow my eyes watered a bit. I feel bad for you!
 
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JordanBlue said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:32 pm:
I am really sorry for you, death is hard. As I was reading this I was singing it in my head. Very good for a song and I got a melody to it and everything. I will have to pull out the old six string and play it to my melody. GOOD JOB.
 
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bmmseh said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:30 am:
This is a very sad song!!! I'm really sorry about your friend that died.
 
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