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You Left Me

Don't cone,
close to me.
That's how I thought,
it should be.
But when you held your hand out,
it felt right.

I feel so numb,
and rundown.
Since you left me,
I have felt so empty.

When you just left me,
my heart just stopped beating.
And as it starts aching,
you're not around.

You hurt me so badly baby.
And you haven't been true lately.
So I will watch you walk away,
cuz it's too late.
Things are so hard without you.
Cuz you haven't been here,
to help me.
And now I'll just fall to the ground.

I'm sinking down,
so steadily.
I turn around,
so carefully.
And once I did things began to fall
into place.

Been missing you,
terribly.
It hurts so much,
just to see;
you with someone else,
that is not me.

Cuz when I saw you with her
you just ignored me.
And now I'm seeing everything,
so clearly.

I see that you've moved on baby.
So now you're not here to save me.
And now I will just fade away
until I hear you say:
"I'm sorry I left you baby.
So will you try and forgive me maybe?"
But that will never happen now.
Cuz you left me.

Each and every time I see you,
you turn away.
And every time I speak,
you walk away.
You said that you loved me,
and I wanted to believe.
But this is just so wrong,
baby can't you see?
But I wanna know at once
how you feel about me now.
Since you left me.
Why did you leave me....



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AddisonElizabeth said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 10:12 am:
Wow. This song reminds me of how i felt when my ex of 10months dumped me. It suckedd! i went through like some kind of depression or something. It took me..hm..like 6 months to get over him. then he came back and i dated him again! only for a little bit. then i dumped him cuz i found another guy(:  soo hah im okay now. BUT anyways. great song. i wish i could actually hear it.
 
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geeebabyy22 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:04 am:
this was so good. you should make it into a song. would be a total hit! great job! write more
 
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xo0amanda17 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:04 am:
this is great .. :) this is my favorite out of all the ones ive read so far .. your awesome!
 
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Jessica17 said...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 10:22 pm:
Wow this is excatly khow i felt when my ex left me....
 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 7:37 pm:
this is great. good job. I can definetly tell this is ur passion. U have awesome talent
 
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kpf1991 said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 10:14 pm:
Hey could you check out "anguish" or "They see through me" and rate it or just let know what you think? you have great talent and i'd really appreciate your input
 
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sweetNsour said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 1:26 pm:
You did a great job on the wording in this song, keep it up and write some more, you get good reactions with relationship songs. Keep writing =]
 
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jaimieolson3 said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 5:42 pm:
i love this,
it reminds me of me and my ex.
/:
 
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tj12321 said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 11:35 am:
This is kind of stupid, but i am 14, and ive never had a girl friend so i dont know what it feel like to break up with someone, but sorry about you and you bf, like the song though, great job
 
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Jazzzy517 said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 3:45 pm:
wow.... i know EXACTLY how that feels... idk if anyone could word it any better.
 
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heaven said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 11:35 am:
im so sorry ya i feel the same way me and my bf just broke uo on 10-19-09 and im hurt bad but its my time to be happy(:
 
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dragonfan said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 1:21 pm:
this is great me and my vary first bf just broke up *sigh* its not fair
 
singingchic15 replied...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 4:20 am :
Awww...I'm sorry about you and your bf. :( This song showed exactly how I felt when mine and I broke up; I hope I didn't hurt you when I wrote it...
 
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