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You Left Me

October 12, 2009
By singingchic15 SILVER, Belfast, Maine
singingchic15 SILVER, Belfast, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Which hurts the most:
Saying something and wishing you had not,
Or saying nothing,
and wishing you had?


Don't cone,
close to me.
That's how I thought,
it should be.
But when you held your hand out,
it felt right.

I feel so numb,
and rundown.
Since you left me,
I have felt so empty.

When you just left me,
my heart just stopped beating.
And as it starts aching,
you're not around.

You hurt me so badly baby.
And you haven't been true lately.
So I will watch you walk away,
cuz it's too late.
Things are so hard without you.
Cuz you haven't been here,
to help me.
And now I'll just fall to the ground.

I'm sinking down,
so steadily.
I turn around,
so carefully.
And once I did things began to fall
into place.

Been missing you,
terribly.
It hurts so much,
just to see;
you with someone else,
that is not me.

Cuz when I saw you with her
you just ignored me.
And now I'm seeing everything,
so clearly.

I see that you've moved on baby.
So now you're not here to save me.
And now I will just fade away
until I hear you say:
"I'm sorry I left you baby.
So will you try and forgive me maybe?"
But that will never happen now.
Cuz you left me.

Each and every time I see you,
you turn away.
And every time I speak,
you walk away.
You said that you loved me,
and I wanted to believe.
But this is just so wrong,
baby can't you see?
But I wanna know at once
how you feel about me now.
Since you left me.
Why did you leave me....

The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this song between me and my ex-boyfriend. And in this song, this is exactly how I felt and maybe some of you can relate.
The song is basically about a bad break-up. Where the girl is not handling the break-up very well and the guy keeps ignoring her

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kadizz BRONZE said...
on Oct. 2 2012 at 10:48 am
kadizz BRONZE, Racine, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
live laugh love

very amazing writting a few spelling errors but no biggy very emotional i give it 5 stars and you have some major creativity 

on Mar. 18 2012 at 1:40 pm
lilyloveswriting BRONZE, Morrisville, Vermont
2 articles 3 photos 23 comments
that is really awesome!:) 

Danishroll said...
on Feb. 25 2012 at 3:22 pm
Wow this is really good. You have so major talent. You will go really far in life. Keep it up.

on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:44 pm
nadi-swagger-chick SILVER, Queens, New York
5 articles 8 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't do things you know you will regret

Wow a wonderful piece of work. This is great :)

ZaNeesa BRONZE said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 6:36 pm
ZaNeesa BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never let anybody tell you who you are because at the end of the day nobody knows you better than yourself.

I've totally dealing with this right now. The song was BEAUTIFUL <3

on Jul. 20 2011 at 4:51 pm
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
86 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.
It's sad but true.
And even dead I'm still ahead
of most of you.

Wow i can totally relate. You're very talented. Maybe you can check out my stuff sometime? I would appreciate it! Keep up the good work!!

 

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on Jul. 1 2011 at 5:24 pm
titangods31 GOLD, Brevard, North Carolina
11 articles 5 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
real eyes realize real lies/ true love never fades

understand completely, and I wouldnt want to either. I

on Jun. 30 2011 at 7:01 pm
singingchic15 SILVER, Belfast, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Which hurts the most:
Saying something and wishing you had not,
Or saying nothing,
and wishing you had?

this song is actually really personal..like i dont let others sing my songs..not yet at least

on Jun. 28 2011 at 4:46 pm
titangods31 GOLD, Brevard, North Carolina
11 articles 5 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
real eyes realize real lies/ true love never fades

that happened to me to, and it hurt so bad, I would love to sing this song if you dont mind...

on Apr. 1 2011 at 7:28 am
writtingislikemagic16 BRONZE, Rochester, New York
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
why u lukern

this is how i felt my ex left me but he left for a girl that was thought to be a friend and he didnt care that he hurt me he just want to use me and still to this very day he tried to come back but hte one simple question i ask is why did u leave , he say he dosent know but now this is my oppoin there going to come back when they lose the other girl and that to me is pitty you have lost your chance

on Mar. 10 2011 at 10:30 pm
Smartie4Life BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 12 comments
This is so good!

on Feb. 17 2011 at 6:59 pm
I relate to it so much....But me and my ex are really good friends and we are getting really close

Kiba1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 25 2011 at 8:44 am
Kiba1 GOLD, Cripple Creek C.O, Colorado
12 articles 5 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Its Not Too Late Its Never too Late.\" \" \'I Cant\' Is Never True\" \"Ill Be The First To Say that Now Im O.K\" \"You Tried To Bring me Down, And You Epicly Failed.\" "Judge me, And I'll Prove you Wrong. Say I'm Nothing? Watch Me Soar."

I LOVE it Its The Way It Is Between Me And My Ex, but, It Would Be Better As A Poem Instead Of A Song, One:Because most Songs Have Chorus And What Not, Two:This IS So Much Better As A Poem. But Seriously , I Truly Absolutly, LOVE It.

ILIKePIEZ said...
on Oct. 29 2010 at 3:31 pm
dude this is depressing me and STOP RHYMING SONGS DONT NEED TO RHYME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Oct. 29 2010 at 3:12 pm
I think it's toucning and what I'm about to say is very negative but I want to be truthful to you.When you write yo lyrics,I notice that you use your true fellings but in a way,it seems to me that how you write it kind of doesn't make sense.I'm being honest but for sure,I know that you can make it better but I'm just saying that the way you write the words don't make sense but it's ok,good luck and I know it can be better!

on Oct. 7 2010 at 3:07 pm
Luminescence BRONZE, New Shoreham, Rhode Island
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writer's block: n. When characters get tired of everything you put them through and go on strike."

I love this! Not that hasn't been said before...

haleyy. SILVER said...
on Aug. 24 2010 at 7:53 pm
haleyy. SILVER, Daleville, Alabama
9 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you have enemies it means you fought for something in your life.
- Eminem

i loooooove this(:

RA.SW said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:13 am
This is nice and touchin i liked it

on Jun. 19 2010 at 9:19 am
Jesusandwordsfanatic PLATINUM, Fayetteville, North Carolina
49 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Romans 14:8-For whether we live, we live unto the Lord; and whether we die, we die unto the Lord: whether we live therefore, or die, we are the Lord's.

very nice and touching! I'd like to give you some advice though. When you said that you felt so empty, God is waiting for you to ask Him to fill it; He can i promise! And wen you said that you felt like you were falling, He can pick you up out of the deepest hole in the earth. I hope this has encouraged you! Just remember, if not this guy, it just means He has someone even better for you. =)

on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:13 pm
Nicholas Hutchins BRONZE, Saugus, Massachusetts
1 article 0 photos 4 comments
It was a really lovely poem. I'm glad it was voted #1.


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