I'm Starting To Forget

October 10, 2009
I'm starting to forget
Your touch, your scent
How it feels to be loved by you

I'm starting to forgot
Your eyes, your lips
How it felt to look then kiss you

You think, think so bad of me
It's pushing me away now
You think, think you got it right
That I've already changed

So this is how it feels
To be alone
And so cold
There's no one here to hold you
So this is how it feels
For you to leave
Me so long
There's no one left to hold you

I'm starting to forget
Your thoughts, your lies
And how it felt to not be trusted

You think, think so bad of me
It's pushing me away now
You think, think you got it right
That I'm already gone


So what did I do to make you act this way?
So what should I do to make you want to stay?


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PrincessSparkleStar said...
Oct. 31, 2012 at 3:33 pm
This is awesom!! I can totally picture it on my ipod :) Please would you check out my poem? TeenInk.com/poetry/ballad/article/499252/Take-a-Chance/
DayDreaamer said...
Jun. 21, 2012 at 12:03 am
Wow. Love it :)
owl-girl said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 10:42 pm
WOW GREAT SONG!!! Is there music? If not you should upload a video of yourself singing it to teen ink :) that would be cool also if you have time, check out some of my stuff? Thanks :)
JackieLoveJoy said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 1:58 pm
That was an amazing song, it's like sad but then true at the same time. I take it you have had a few sad moments in your life?
kaykaybeck said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 10:51 am
I really love this!
dreamer9492 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 9:39 pm
i really, really, really liked this!! i could see this being a hit song! good job, keep writing! can you comment some of my stuff as well? i'd greatly apreciate it =)
BurningRose said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 6:29 pm
i LOVE THIS!!!! please do you have a melody??? i would LOVE to be able to know it!!!!!!!!! this is GREAT GREAT GREAT!!! gosh im trying to sing to it but i dont know if i have the beat right yet ...XD
Bookworm7 said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 2:44 pm
I love it! I hope you write more!:)
Christa W. said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 8:37 pm
cool song. it sounds awesome!!!
keilly said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 7:10 am
i loved this song. i dont no how you did the beet for it when singing ti but when i sang it it sounded very good.
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:03 pm
Niceee! I take it you're a singer :) That's neat.
keilly replied...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 9:03 pm
well thanks to you. i take u as a very good writer and i hope you grow to become a recodnise person cuz u really can write. hope the best 4 u
Saphira96 said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 5:16 pm
Wow that was amazing and sad! I don't know why but i love sad things!
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:01 pm
:) lol I love sad things too...movies, songs...
Saphira96 replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 6:39 pm
Yeah me too! I love sad movies and songs, and books! They make me feel good!
milkdud-music-freak said...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 6:40 pm
Wow, i really like this song, its awesome.
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:59 pm
Thanks so much! :)
VampireLover88 said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 10:59 pm
I like it it shows emotion
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:58 pm
Thank you! :)
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