October 9, 2009
We were two friends a boy and a girl
We were two friends who were out of this world
We were two friends in it till the end

But he won't see the smile i'm faking
Or my heart breaking
And he won't see the love in my eyes
So this is my goodbye

How could he be so oblivious
How could just throw away all of my trust
How could he leave me in the dust

How could he not see the smile i was faking
Or my heart breaking
How could he not see the love in my eyes
Or hear my goodbye

Didn't he didn't he know it
Didn't I didn't i show it
Didn't he didn't he see it
I just can't I just can't believe it

How could he not see the smile i was faking
Or my heart breaking
How could he not see the love in my eyes
Or hear my goodbye

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locolizzie said...
Aug. 17, 2012 at 7:16 am
agreed, that's it is awesome! comment for comment?
DeAunna said...
Oct. 14, 2011 at 10:44 am
Very much a "Taylor Swift" type of song haha, a few misplaced of missing words that messed up the flow a little, but I still get a very clear idea of where you were going with it... Great song with a precise and relatable meaning  
TradeMistakes13 replied...
Oct. 14, 2011 at 1:21 pm

it isn't like taylor swift at all.

but apart from that, i agree. this song is awesome <3 :)

ChristineGeorgia20 said...
Oct. 14, 2011 at 7:58 am
Great Job!
ThandiweThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 5:46 pm
i <3 thisss. this is so good :]
14hipkri said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 12:35 pm
I read one of your poems and had to read your other ones! THEY ARE AMAZING!!!!! (:
jojo82897 said...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 5:16 am
I should of read this when i was in love with a boy i hung out with like every day and he did break my heart when i told him what i felt. So this helped me! BTW it was awesome!!
Fenderchic said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 5:02 pm
Wow. Sometimes I feel the same way. Good job.
Hope U. said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 4:50 pm
that song was sweet it was very great
Leprechaun said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 4:07 pm
This tells me alot. You purerd out your heart. I write stuff like this...its how i friend and i both...this describes us bot not exactly the love part we love eachtother but not like fact my friend is reading what im typing sorry alexa!
Hannah F. said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 9:21 am
I love it, it acully descirbes a situation with my best freind Alex
njume7925 said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 9:55 pm

I love it, it was just great.

please check out some of mine i'm really good but not that noticed

Striker said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 3:57 pm
This is amazing. I hope you put it to music because it is really good.
This*Lit*Is*Bananas This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 12:01 pm
Aww I really love this...I've gone through something with my best guy friend, and now I'm afraid I've ruined it for us because I made a move...this song speaks to me. Thank you! :)
oxStardustxo said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 7:28 pm
wow really inspiring and beautiful...
sunshine55 said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 10:32 am
aww this song is nice because is so sad. i like it because this is all true sometimes when you have a guy best frind you can love him.. and i can sing this to a guy best friend and say goodbye.
LOGAN said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 10:31 am
this is more for girls.the reason i say this is because it showshow a girl really cares about her friend.
sunshine56 said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 10:30 am
I like this song alot i could sing it to man i have right now so he can feel how i feel. Now its time to say goodbye to each other
Lonleydandy said...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 7:45 am
Haha, I really like this one...I can relate....haha
Kate L. said...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 8:02 pm
This is beautiful! The mood expressed in it kind of reminds me of a Taylor Swift song.
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