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October 9, 2009
By broadwaygrl496 BRONZE, Manhasset, New York
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We were two friends a boy and a girl
We were two friends who were out of this world
We were two friends in it till the end

But he won't see the smile i'm faking
Or my heart breaking
And he won't see the love in my eyes
So this is my goodbye

How could he be so oblivious
How could just throw away all of my trust
How could he leave me in the dust

How could he not see the smile i was faking
Or my heart breaking
How could he not see the love in my eyes
Or hear my goodbye

Didn't he didn't he know it
Didn't I didn't i show it
Didn't he didn't he see it
I just can't I just can't believe it

How could he not see the smile i was faking
Or my heart breaking
How could he not see the love in my eyes
Or hear my goodbye

© Christy P., Providence, RI

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Awizaleftyap GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2012 at 7:16 am
Awizaleftyap GOLD, Jones Chapel, Alabama
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agreed, that's it is awesome! comment for comment?
HarlequinHurricane said...
on Oct. 14 2011 at 1:21 pm
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it isn't like taylor swift at all.

but apart from that, i agree. this song is awesome <3 :)

DeAunna said...
on Oct. 14 2011 at 10:44 am
DeAunna, Carrollton, Texas
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Very much a "Taylor Swift" type of song haha, a few misplaced of missing words that messed up the flow a little, but I still get a very clear idea of where you were going with it... Great song with a precise and relatable meaning  
ChristineGeorgia20 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 14 2011 at 7:58 am
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Great Job!
Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 5:46 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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i <3 thisss. this is so good :]
14hipkri PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 12:35 pm
14hipkri PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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I read one of your poems and had to read your other ones! THEY ARE AMAZING!!!!! (:
SaM:) GOLD said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:18 am
SaM:) GOLD, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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that's because it is part of the song the way i loved you..well sort of.
Love-is-painful BRONZE said...
on Mar. 8 2011 at 5:16 am
Love-is-painful BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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I should of read this when i was in love with a boy i hung out with like every day and he did break my heart when i told him what i felt. So this helped me! BTW it was awesome!!
Fenderchic BRONZE said...
on Feb. 14 2011 at 5:02 pm
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Wow. Sometimes I feel the same way. Good job.
Hope Udarbe said...
on Jan. 27 2011 at 4:50 pm
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that song was sweet it was very great
Leprechaun said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 4:07 pm
This tells me alot. You purerd out your heart. I write stuff like this...its how i vent...my friend and i both...this describes us bot not exactly the love part we love eachtother but not like that...in fact my friend is reading what im typing sorry alexa!
hrf1434 GOLD said...
on Aug. 22 2010 at 9:21 am
hrf1434 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
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I love it, it acully descirbes a situation with my best freind Alex
LikeToPlayFish GOLD said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 9:55 pm
LikeToPlayFish GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
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I love it, it was just great.

please check out some of mine i'm really good but not that noticed

Striker GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 3:57 pm
Striker GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
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This is amazing. I hope you put it to music because it is really good.
IsobelFree DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 12:01 pm
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Aww I really love this...I've gone through something with my best guy friend, and now I'm afraid I've ruined it for us because I made a move...this song speaks to me. Thank you! :)
oxStardustxo SILVER said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 7:28 pm
oxStardustxo SILVER, State College, Pennsylvania
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wow really inspiring and beautiful...

<3
sunshine55 said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:32 am
aww this song is nice because is so sad. i like it because this is all true sometimes when you have a guy best frind you can love him.. and i can sing this to a guy best friend and say goodbye.
LOGAN said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:31 am
this is more for girls.the reason i say this is because it showshow a girl really cares about her friend.
sunshine56 said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:30 am
I like this song alot i could sing it to man i have right now so he can feel how i feel. Now its time to say goodbye to each other
Lonleydandy said...
on Dec. 23 2009 at 7:45 am
Haha, I really like this one...I can relate....haha