October 5, 2009
Our sanguine bodies, moving in the flow
Can't stop even if we try, why can't I slow
Be slaves to the beat, friction lessened by heat
We're taken by the sound, can't stop this spinnin'
This spinnin' round
We're moving up and down to the heat and the sound
Touched all over by the pulsing noise, no can't stop these boys
Tapping your heels or snapping yourfingers
Just to keep the time, want you to be mine
Can't help but stare, I can't to you there
So I move along not knowing where I belong
I see you follow and I try to swallow
I can't seem to get it down, no, I can't seem to touch the ground
We touch, then you pull me near
You tell me something that I can't hear
But I can see in your eyes
That you tell me no lies
Now enslaved by the song, yes we dance for so long
An eternity it seems to play, I still can't hear what you try to say
And as I watch those lips, all ruby and full
I can't hope to try to resist your pull

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Live4 said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 10:16 am
Its very good. It flows very well and i love the rhyming.
Lizette said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 8:39 pm
i love how it flows!  and how you take the concept of music and a boy and bring them together! great piece!
LadyMoon said...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 11:23 am
Really catchy...Me & my friend started singing it the moment we began reading it!!We loved IT!!5 stars! 
palak said...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 10:21 am
i love this song especially the rhyming
LesleyChow said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 9:35 am
It was so fun......ny!
CylasPalacios said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 12:24 pm
I love the rhymes, but how long did it take you to get this approved by teen ink? It is taking forever for mine
ch.prince replied...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 9:27 am
it didn't take long for this one, but i have one that i've submitted probably over a month ago but hasn't been approved or denied. maybe they're just backlogged or something.
PointOfNoReturn replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 5:13 pm
my pictures finally got approved after about a week but my poems are still pending
ch.prince said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 8:46 am
I love this song!!!
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