Enslaved

October 5, 2009
By ch.prince BRONZE, Rimrock, Arizona
ch.prince BRONZE, Rimrock, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Our sanguine bodies, moving in the flow
Can't stop even if we try, why can't I slow
Be slaves to the beat, friction lessened by heat
We're taken by the sound, can't stop this spinnin'
This spinnin' round
We're moving up and down to the heat and the sound
Touched all over by the pulsing noise, no can't stop these boys
Tapping your heels or snapping yourfingers
Just to keep the time, want you to be mine
Can't help but stare, I can't to you there
So I move along not knowing where I belong
I see you follow and I try to swallow
I can't seem to get it down, no, I can't seem to touch the ground
We touch, then you pull me near
You tell me something that I can't hear
But I can see in your eyes
That you tell me no lies
Now enslaved by the song, yes we dance for so long
An eternity it seems to play, I still can't hear what you try to say
And as I watch those lips, all ruby and full
I can't hope to try to resist your pull


The author's comments:
It's supposed to have a dance beat. I sort of based it on She Wants Revenge's song Out 0f Control.

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Live4 said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 10:16 am
Its very good. It flows very well and i love the rhyming.

Lizette SILVER said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 8:39 pm
Lizette SILVER, Delphos, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone is entitled to be stupid. But some people abuse the privlidge!

i love how it flows!  and how you take the concept of music and a boy and bring them together! great piece!

on Aug. 3 2011 at 5:13 pm
PointOfNoReturn SILVER, :D, California
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Favorite Quote:
Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened(:

my pictures finally got approved after about a week but my poems are still pending

on Jun. 11 2010 at 11:23 am
LadyMoon DIAMOND, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I'm so weird I'm normal
-Khalil, a friend

Really catchy...Me & my friend started singing it the moment we began reading it!!We loved IT!!5 stars! 

on Jun. 11 2010 at 10:21 am
livsinthecity SILVER, Toronto, Ontario
6 articles 13 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love means never having to say you are sorry.
-Erich Segal (in Love Story)

i love this song especially the rhyming

LesleyChow said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:35 am
It was so fun......ny!

on Jan. 9 2010 at 9:27 am
ch.prince BRONZE, Rimrock, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 12 comments
it didn't take long for this one, but i have one that i've submitted probably over a month ago but hasn't been approved or denied. maybe they're just backlogged or something.

on Jan. 8 2010 at 12:24 pm
CylasPalacios GOLD, Macomb, Illinois
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I love the rhymes, but how long did it take you to get this approved by teen ink? It is taking forever for mine

on Nov. 24 2009 at 8:46 am
ch.prince BRONZE, Rimrock, Arizona
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I love this song!!!


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