9 Years

9 years ago i was four.
Standing by your passenger door.
Daddy, daddy, dont leave,
Stay with me so i can breathe,
The Airs too thick here,
Help me please,
The pain just wont ease,
Father, Father hear me now,
Tomorrows too late,
Tonight your last bow,
A fight for your fate,
Though your sure to loose,
Please just take me with you,
Im up for the ride,
But from gods hand you have to hide,
Daddy, daddy, just one more breath,
I know now,
you cant hide from death.





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Jaymi P. said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 8:57 pm
This is an amazing poem. I am sorry for your loss, but out of something so terrible cam something beautiful. Its brings people just a tiny step toward knowing the pain you are feeling.
 
sadie912 said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 5:27 pm
oh...my...god
dats so beutiful *cry,cry* really
 
SarahG replied...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 8:18 pm
thank you soo much.
 
brianj said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 3:49 pm
Halfway through the lyrics, the floodgates behind my eyes opened. I actually started tearing up over the bitter sadness of this song! Death is a terrible monster that we all fear, and the way you put that idea to paper is absolutely amazing. The last line, "I know now you can't hide from death," was one that truly effected my crying and take on your song. What a touching way to sum it all up! The image that you painted in my mind of all of your emotions with your dad's de... (more »)
 
SarahG replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:05 pm
thank you so very much. It's ok i cried when i wrote it. Thank you so much for your praise, it has made my day better. :)
 
Kass F replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:11 pm
Sarah, wow.when I read this I was gettin all teared up. I'm so sorry for what happened to you & your family. Everytime I think about it, I get depressed. Sarah you know I'm ALWAYS here for you when you need to talk to..whether its at school or what. I love you Sarah dear (:
 
SarahG replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:16 pm
I love you too, kassidy dear.
 
Kimberly. :) replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:33 pm
Omgsh. Sarah. This is soo sad:(
im soo sorry for what happened to you & your family! :( ..
it makes me just wanna cry! :(
i love you soo much & im soo deeply sorry for what happened!
Love you<3
 
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