Drift

October 4, 2009
By ElizNieves PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
ElizNieves PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
36 articles 13 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's funny. Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you start missing everybody." The Catcher in the Rye


Sing me a lullaby
I am about to cry
Please don't leave me
I am angry

I lived this day
I'm not okay
Madness surrounds me
Where is serenity?
You are not hear
I have to fear

I am alert
I am so hurt
Why bother?
I have to wonder

You are gone
I was wrong
You were the light
Shining brght

I am still here
My dear
I miss you
I don't know what to do


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on Feb. 5 2010 at 3:38 pm
ElizNieves PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
36 articles 13 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's funny. Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you start missing everybody." The Catcher in the Rye

Thanks for the tip! I have actually started writing songs to the tune of other songs, like "Barbie Girl," "Tik Tok," "Roxanne," and "Electric Avenue."

on Feb. 4 2010 at 4:49 pm
SwordGirl SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have enemies? Good. That means you've stood up for something, sometime in your life."

-- Winston Chuchill

It's really good! You did a good job of rhyming the lines! Do you have any idea of a tune? It might be easier to come up with a good one (if you haven't already!) if you try alternating the short lines with some longer ones.


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