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My life is crazy just like spinnin’ round in circles,
‘Cause I’m that type of girl that paints my nails purple.
It may be black, cause I like it like that,
I don’t wear those crazy colors, no, and that’s a fact.
If you wanna come & get me,
Then I’m open & I’m ready.
I have a thing for competitions,
It’s like the main source of my missions.

Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x
I don’t care if you wanna criticize me,
I’ll take your dirty words, and put it right behind me.
You might think I’m a little crazy, but that’s ok,
‘Cause I don’t really care, what you have to say.
Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x

I have one confession that I really wanna make,
I’ll try to start a band, no matter what it takes.
I’ll try to be the best that I can be,
And then one day, you all we see.
That I’m ok, really, yes-I-am,
I’m just regular teen with dreams and a plan.
I just try, and oh, its really hard,
Cause i only ask for one thing and its takin’ so long.

Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x
I don’t care if you wanna criticize me,
I’ll take your dirty words, and put it right behind me.
You might think I’m a little crazy, but that’s ok,
‘Cause I don’t really care, what you have to say.
Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x

I’m not conceited, I only want one thing,
To be in the spot light and oh, just sing.

Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x
I don’t care if you wanna criticize me,
I’ll take your dirty words, and put it right behind me.
You might think I’m a little crazy, but that’s ok,
‘Cause I don’t really care, what you have to say.
Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x

I said!

I don’t care if you wanna criticize me,
I’ll take your dirty words, and put it right behind me.
You might think I’m a little crazy, but that’s ok,
‘Cause I don’t really care, what you have to say.
Woah-o-woah-o-ooo-woah-ooo-woah-ooowoah-oo-woah-o-o2x



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Thandiwe said...
Oct. 28, 2012 at 9:47 am:
Thank you guys so much for all the wonderful feed back. i really appreciate it :) i'll have some more of my work on tumblr (thandielove13.tumblr.com)
 
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MusicallyInclinedx22x said...
Oct. 6, 2012 at 1:30 pm:
Yo this is awesome. I love it
 
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lostinstockholm said...
May 24, 2012 at 5:33 am:

hey you - love the song, super cute.

i was thinking of actually using the bulk of your lyrics and recording a song. before i do it i wanted to ask your permission and see if it was ok?

-w

 
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Alexa19 said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 6:56 pm:
That's really cute! I truly enjoyed it!
 
Thandiwe replied...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 3:09 pm :
Thank you :)
 
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chloe_garrett said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 2:48 pm:
I LOVEEEE this soo much! i think everyone can relate to this! keep doing what you do.
 
Thandiwe replied...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 3:08 pm :
Thanks alot :D
 
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BrokenThorn said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 5:07 pm:
I can relate to this song so well! LOVE THIS! Comment on my first song posted here?
 
Thandiwe replied...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 12:38 pm :
Thanks love:] and sure no prob
 
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mikey123 said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 8:23 am:

sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 

awsome <3 it :)

 
Thandiwe replied...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 10:23 am :
thanks alot :]
 
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Skullcuffz said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 8:25 am:
wow i love this one it's wonderful i can relate.. you should go for it make your own band sing your songs.. i want to hear them on the radio..
 
Thandiwe replied...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 11:23 am :
THANKS SO MUCH [single tear of happiness :D]
 
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Thandiwe said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 5:19 pm:
thanks everyone for the complliments but i dont want to write lyrics for other people. i wanna sing these songs myself:) i have a voice
 
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Emilia901 said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 8:16 pm:
Wow, your song was really awesome and honestly, it was truly inspirational. If I pictured anyone singing it would probably be  Hayley Williams =^_^= Good job!
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 2:32 pm :
thanks alot
 
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everthought said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 1:42 pm:
wow this is so...teeny-bopper-ish you know? you could be writing lyrics for miley cyrus, even. It's your choice if you consider this comment a compliment or not ;)
 
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Bella913 said...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 8:40 am:
i love this song!! it relates to so many people in this century. thanks and keep writing
 
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rebeldiamond1313kd said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 5:54 pm:
very good. I like this song.
 
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Goooood said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 1:30 pm:
I loved it and it was like the story of my life
 
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