Precious

October 2, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


I know you don’t notice me,
Don’t even know that I exist.
But in all of my dreams,






You’re in “Bop” magazines.
Your face is so handsome and precious to me,
I don’t care about you’re flaws,





You’re my fantasy
I go crazy thinkin’ about you
And I really want you.
You don’t know even know
Just wanna….

Chorus: Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious
You’re cute, you’re smart,
You’re everything I want, (everything I want, everything I wa-ant)
Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious

I stare at you in Science class,
Ask the teacher for a hallway pass…
Just so I could see your face.
I have this overwhelming crush,
Can’t even tell my friends.
That I like you very much,
But then again…
You make me wanna

Yeah eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious
You’re cute, you’re smart,
You’re everything I want, (everything I want, everything I wa-ant)
Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious

What will, I do?
I really like u
Maybe I’ll move on, who knows?
Oh

Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious
You’re cute, you’re smart,
You’re everything I want, (everything I want, everything I wa-ant)
Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious

Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious
You’re cute, you’re smart,
You’re everything I want, (everything I want, everything I wa-ant)
Yea eah eah e eah eah…
You’re…my…pre-cious


The author's comments:
This is song is really special to me, i wrote it myself:)

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Liberiangurl said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 7:13 am
I freakin enjoy reading .. THIS IS AMAZING!!!!

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 16 2011 at 9:22 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Thankkks xD

on Oct. 14 2011 at 1:28 pm
HarlequinHurricane, SomewhereLikeThat., Other
0 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
A horse ate my cousin once. Me and horses got a fuuuueeeddd.

<3 this. 

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:51 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

well i've sang it lol but idk if that counts

on Sep. 8 2011 at 8:29 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

I NEED to hear this song! OMG I love it! I can totally relate, except for the part about how he doesn't notice you, because my crush is my friend. Anyway, have you put this to music?

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 4:02 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Thanks. and no it's not about him. honestly i'm not really a fan of his music

on Aug. 31 2011 at 8:28 am
BeccaMarie BRONZE, Florida
1 article 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"just be yourself, there is no one better."
~ Taylor Swift

i honest to God think this is about justin bieber. lol if your talking about like bop magazines and stuff... but its cute i liked it. :)

on Jul. 6 2011 at 4:32 pm
holagirl78 SILVER, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
7 articles 1 photo 15 comments
He doesnt have a FB and I'm afrad to leave a voice mail (he never picks up even when other peopel try to call) because his moms on there!!!! xD

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 11:18 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

omg!!!! u should hit him up on fb or something just in case he didnt get it :

on Jul. 5 2011 at 7:25 pm
holagirl78 SILVER, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
7 articles 1 photo 15 comments
Thanks, I texted him how I feel (about 3 weeks ago because on the last day of school i wasnt able to talk to him) and i didnt get a text back but I think his mom read it and deleted it because she's on his voicemail....

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 3:37 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

good luck with that!!! :]

on Jul. 4 2011 at 10:17 pm
holagirl78 SILVER, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
7 articles 1 photo 15 comments
feel the same way about the guy I like <3 :)

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:08 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

i am a girl!!! lol and thanks!!!xD

on Apr. 28 2011 at 8:47 pm
SergSG94 BRONZE, Colton, California
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
You don't know what you have until It's gone.

Really amazing song!! and this is exactly how i feel (but for a girl :P) you should check some of my work out, i would really like to see what u think

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 2:55 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks so much :D

limelove said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 3:16 pm
limelove, Gresham, Oregon
0 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Memories last forever.

I really LOVE this song. Ithink you put it together very well.

 


on Jan. 19 2011 at 8:22 am
Skullcuffz SILVER, Waupaca, Wisconsin
6 articles 6 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
--Edgar Allan Poe.


I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
--Edgar Allan Poe

wow this is amazing i hope to read more from you.. your great!!

on Nov. 4 2010 at 6:31 pm
livingmylife4512 SILVER, Pleasant Plains, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Any lyric by The Maine or Never Shout Never
"I am I, you are you, we are we, we could live in such harmony"

This is really good! I read the first part of the song that you called Crush and I wanted to hear the rest. Thanks for posting it(:

I really enjoyed it, you have talent(:


Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 3:54 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Thanks so much :D

on Jun. 15 2010 at 3:02 pm
HOPEfully SILVER, Clayton, North Carolina
6 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
My Cinderella. She is real. She exists. I pray for her constantly. May God satisfy the desires of her heart, draw her close, consume her. May He claim her passions, her identity, her refuge, her hopes, her strengths and weaknesses -Adam Young

i love this. the rythem is so amazing, i can tell what it is. its completley amazing. i love it so much


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