Forever and Always (Original)

September 23, 2009
By -Peb! SILVER, Heber Springs, Arkansas
-Peb! SILVER, Heber Springs, Arkansas
7 articles 3 photos 29 comments

[First Verse]
I lay in bed unable to sleep
Thinking about you
Remembering all the times we've had
And the way I feel about you

The other day you asked me
How a girl like me could like you
And now that I've thought about it
I have an answer for you

[Chorus]
It's your touch
It's your voice
I have no other choice
But to stay
By your side
And go along for the ride
It's your clothes
It's your hair
It's everyone else's stares
It's your laugh
It's your smile
That makes everything worthwhile

[Second Verse]
I love your truck - just you and me
Cruising down the street
And the butterflies I seem to feel
Everytime our hands meet

I love the way your hugs feel
And the way you say my name
The way even the smallest thing
Can take my breath away

[Chorus]

[Third Verse]
I hope that you can realize
I mean everything I say
I hope I answered your question
And you feel the same way

You make me a better person
And I hope things never change
'Cause the way I feel about you
Will stay forever and always

Forever and always, I am yours.


The author's comments:
This is my poem, Forever and Always, the way I originally intended it to be.

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-Peb! SILVER said...
on Feb. 10 2011 at 9:51 am
-Peb! SILVER, Heber Springs, Arkansas
7 articles 3 photos 29 comments
Thank you so much! And yes that sounds fine to me.  The only things I ask is that I'm given credit and you let me see it when it's done! :)

on Dec. 28 2010 at 8:01 pm
alymarie3 PLATINUM, Leavenworth, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Piglet: How do you spell love?
Pooh: You don't spell it, you feel it

This reminds me of my boyfriend and i. Really touches my heart! Keep writing

on Dec. 15 2010 at 9:14 am
RC_of_emotions GOLD, Star City, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
BOMB DIGGETY!!!!!

love your chorus. reading this reminds me of stuff i've written but haven't had the chance to post since my journal is never with me when i'm on.

on Dec. 6 2010 at 7:54 pm
freewriter_123 SILVER, Miramar, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whoever said nothing was impossible never tried slamming a revolving door." ;)

wow this is really good. Hey do you mind if I just use the chorus for a story I'm working on? It's just this would really go well with it and I promise to give you all the credit at the end. What do you say?

-Peb! SILVER said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 8:57 pm
-Peb! SILVER, Heber Springs, Arkansas
7 articles 3 photos 29 comments
Thank you that's what I was hoping for :)

-Peb! SILVER said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 8:57 pm
-Peb! SILVER, Heber Springs, Arkansas
7 articles 3 photos 29 comments
Thank you!!!

-Peb! SILVER said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 8:57 pm
-Peb! SILVER, Heber Springs, Arkansas
7 articles 3 photos 29 comments
Thank you so much!  I really means a lot to me :)

iamAPHRODITE said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 8:00 pm

I love this song it is one word: Amazing. You are such a talented song writer! I think that if you continue writing songs as cute and beautiful as this and you record the music, I am sure someone will notice your talent and it will be a number one hit! :D

~iamAPHRODITE~


on Apr. 30 2010 at 9:10 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

wow....i loved it haha i was putting the words to a beat and tune and it sounds amazing! great great work!

on Apr. 10 2010 at 4:26 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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I can if you want! i sing and have all this recording stuff...but only with your permission.. (srry 4 misspelling

on Mar. 17 2010 at 1:23 pm
Bella913 SILVER, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Death is easy, living is harder."

i think this song was so amazing. the chorus was my favorite part. if some one recods it it will be cheerished. keep writing<3

-Peb! SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 9:33 am
-Peb! SILVER, Heber Springs, Arkansas
7 articles 3 photos 29 comments
No, I wish I could! haha

But thank you so much for the feedback, it would be amazing for someone to sing/record it!

on Feb. 19 2010 at 4:26 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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love this im a country singer and i have people who love this do you sing?

-Peb! SILVER said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 4:02 pm
-Peb! SILVER, Heber Springs, Arkansas
7 articles 3 photos 29 comments
Thank you, I don't really listen to Taylor Swift so I didn't even realize she has a song called Forever and Always. Maybe I'll think about renaming...but thank you for the advice! :)

-Peb! SILVER said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 4:00 pm
-Peb! SILVER, Heber Springs, Arkansas
7 articles 3 photos 29 comments
Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback, and I read your poem - it was amazing! :)

on Dec. 10 2009 at 6:31 pm
NineMuses PLATINUM, Pelham, New York
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Favorite Quote:
You can't wait for inspiration. You have to go after it with a club.
-Jack London

I really liked this- you captured something beutiful and powerful here. I do think the title's similarities to Taylor Swift's song are a bit distracting... but the it does fit the piece very well. I'm curious to hear what this would sound like when put to music!

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 5:19 am
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 407 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

This is very nice. I read it almost expecting a play off of Taylor Swift's song ( I'm not accusing you of plagiarism I was just drawing similarities in the title.) Seeing as I hated the Taylor Swift song I was skeptical about reading. But luckily the similarities ended in the title. It was a very good song. I particularly liked the third verse. Keep it up.

God bless,

...,


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