Crush

August 26, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)


The author's comments:
This song i wrote is very special to me :)

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Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:50 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

omg that sucks :( good luck though!!! and thanks

on Sep. 8 2011 at 8:26 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

I really like the start of this song! I know how you feel, although my crush is my friend, but he doesn't like me that way.

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 2:39 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks. precious* is the continuation if u want to read the rest

liberianbadd said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 12:35 pm
this is sooo guud, i really enjoyed reading it, and its is so true

on Aug. 31 2011 at 8:26 am
BeccaMarie BRONZE, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"just be yourself, there is no one better."
~ Taylor Swift

... somebodys got bieber fever... ;)

on Aug. 17 2011 at 8:34 pm
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
21 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
Love Always. :)
When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don't waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

Good job, I'm off to find the rest of the song to read! Keep up the good work! Check out some of my work if you have time! Happy writing! :)

aysh.panji said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 9:32 am
this is one of the best songs better then any real singer .thnx.ill see the rest l8er.

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 10:50 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

i did post the whole song in another called "precious crush"

on Apr. 29 2011 at 6:14 pm
ummmmm...i dont really like this. i dont see why its #1. maybe if you post the whole song...

on Apr. 29 2011 at 8:25 am
blueyedberachbum95 BRONZE, Grandville, Michigan
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awwe so sweet! really good(:

aawalle96 said...
on Mar. 16 2011 at 3:37 pm
aawalle96, Bradenton, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"everything is okay in the end,if its not okay its not the end".

''I rather have no friends and be myself, then to have friends and not be myself and suffer".

i wonder who the person of their dreams

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2011 at 11:18 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

um...i dont get it wat do yu mean?

on Feb. 22 2011 at 6:25 pm
BeeForever SILVER, Nezperce, Idaho
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My words fly up, my thoughts remain below: Words without thoughts never to heaven go."

Okay. Well, who happens to be in Bop magazines? Taylor Swift, Taylor Lautner, Selena Gomez, Justin Bieber....?????

on Jan. 18 2011 at 12:12 pm
Skullcuffz SILVER, Waupaca, Wisconsin
6 articles 6 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
--Edgar Allan Poe.


I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
--Edgar Allan Poe

i wish you did to i want to hear this song soon :)

Da.Rae BRONZE said...
on Jan. 9 2011 at 7:50 pm
Da.Rae BRONZE, Osceola Mills, Pennsylvania
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This is really good!

As always,
Da Rae


Nick121 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 9 2011 at 3:04 pm
Nick121 BRONZE, Manhasset, New York
2 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you're trying to achieve, there will be roadblocks. I've had them; everybody has had them. But obstacles don't have to stop you. If you run into a wall, don't turn around and give up. Figure out how to climb it, go through it, or work around it.
Michael Jordan

It was very Good

on Jan. 9 2011 at 11:14 am
Haleyelizabeth, Wallingford, Vermont
0 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it's meant to be, it'll happen."

Beautiful<3 

i think you should have added some more before you posted it, though. 

But dont stop, its amazing and i cant wait until i hear the rest. :)


on Jan. 9 2011 at 9:37 am
aspiringauthor_ BRONZE, Fairfield, Connecticut
1 article 0 photos 326 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Darkness cannot drive out darkness, only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate, only love can do that." - MLK Jr.

I tried writing a song, and posted it on here but it hasn't showed up yet. 

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 4:05 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

wow thanks :)..yes it did come from my heart i thought abotu him wheni wrote it

on Nov. 5 2010 at 3:51 pm
i love it!Its really good (honestly) , i like how its not some superficial love story that's cookie cutter, it really comes from your heart:)


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