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I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)




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...someone.... said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 6:14 pm:
ummmmm...i dont really like this. i dont see why its #1. maybe if you post the whole song...
 
Thandiwe replied...
Apr. 30, 2011 at 10:50 am :
i did post the whole song in another called "precious crush"
 
kparker2012 replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 10:50 am :
Thart's what I was thinking....lol
 
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blueyedberachbum95 said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 8:25 am:
awwe so sweet! really good(:
 
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paragirl13 said...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 3:37 pm:
i wonder who the person of their dreams
 
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Thandiwe said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 11:18 am:
um...i dont get it wat do yu mean?
 
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BeeForever said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 6:25 pm:
Okay. Well, who happens to be in Bop magazines? Taylor Swift, Taylor Lautner, Selena Gomez, Justin Bieber....?????
 
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Da.Rae said...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 7:50 pm:

This is really good!

As always,
Da Rae

 
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Nick121 said...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 3:04 pm:
It was very Good
 
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Haleyelizabeth said...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 11:14 am:

Beautiful<3 

i think you should have added some more before you posted it, though. 

But dont stop, its amazing and i cant wait until i hear the rest. :)

 
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AspiringauhorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 9:37 am:
I tried writing a song, and posted it on here but it hasn't showed up yet. 
 
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waitingforthatsome1 said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 3:51 pm:
i love it!Its really good (honestly) , i like how its not some superficial love story that's cookie cutter, it really comes from your heart:)
 
Thandiwe replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 4:05 pm :
wow thanks :)..yes it did come from my heart i thought abotu him wheni wrote it
 
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WinterMoon said...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 9:12 pm:
i loved it! please post the rest when your done!
 
Thandiwe replied...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 3:28 pm :
lol. thanks..i did..but i renamed it precious..altho i still want it 2 b called crush still..so jus look at the songs i posted and u'll c it
 
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Thandiwe said...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 4:16 pm:
thanks everyone who commented i'll b sure to remember yu all if this song ever gets anywhere :D
 
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Thandiwe said...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 4:15 pm:
Well, thanks, and i know i've recieved alot of comments, but urs probably stood out the most :)
 
aysh.panji replied...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 9:32 am :
this is one of the best songs better then any real singer .thnx.ill see the rest l8er.
 
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Mayzie2010$$ said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 4:23 pm:
Woww! that's Awesome! keep writing songs!
 
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Skullcuffz said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 6:33 pm:
i know you got alot of comments but i went through all your work and i really like all of them wow i wish i could hear the music behind the lyrics but maybe one day i will
 
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