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You're Mine

Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!



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sportsycrystal said...
May 30, 2011 at 8:30 am:

I really love this... and i really like your name btw i think it really stands out to every dreamer and writer here

 

 
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twpercy said...
May 22, 2011 at 11:41 am:
this is good.
 
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Staciemarielewis said...
May 16, 2011 at 7:34 pm:
Wow this is a really good song...could I possibly use this sometime?
 
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purplelass_3209 said...
May 4, 2011 at 1:02 am:
I like your song *´'`°¤¸¸.•'´`'•.¸¸¤°´'`**´'`°¤¸¸.•'´`'•.¸¸¤°´'`**´'`°¤¸¸.•'´`'•.¸¸¤°´'`*
 
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hunnybuntwixThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 30, 2011 at 11:24 pm:
It's very well written! i love it keep up the good work buddy!
 
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Sierra379 said...
Apr. 30, 2011 at 3:37 pm:
I love it! ...wow youve got talent
 
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Monalicious said...
Apr. 30, 2011 at 12:14 pm:
this was so amazin...i really loved it
 
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ehascher said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:27 am:
This is really good! I love the first verse, and the beginning of the chorus. You should definitely try and put it to music!
 
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cookiemonster said...
Apr. 21, 2011 at 4:24 pm:
this is a really good espetialy for a first timer. its also deep i get were this is comeing from. if i were you then id keep writing and the more you do the better itl get.
 
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hello-im-a-koala said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:30 pm:

This is really beautiful. I love it and I wish I could write good songs -_______- I'm so jealous...

 

 

 

 

 

 
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Duane said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 12:52 pm:

hey love the song just wondering if I can use it for my first song on my record?

love it

 
distant_dreamer replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 9:53 pm :
Thanks for all the great comments, and yes you can use it for your track, I would be sooo honored! Could you maybe post it on youtube, so I could listen to it? :) Thanks so much again!
 
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Maveric said...
Apr. 8, 2011 at 7:43 pm:
wow this is great u realy need to have someone sing it or send it to recording co. if u get the chance read some on mine n tell me what u think once again that was great
 
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kaykaybeck said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 8:52 pm:
Very good (: you should keep writing!
 
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distant_dreamer said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 8:19 pm:
Oh my goodenss, I just am so overwhelmed!!! I want to thank each one of you for your comments, they mean sooo much to me, and you all just made my day! :D
 
candygirl1985 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 8:55 pm :
Could you maybe set these lyrics to music? And maybe have someone sing it? I really like it, it is very good!
 
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Nerd34 said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 2:35 pm:

I loved this great job!!!!!!!! Keep writing

 

 

 
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LoveMeFoever said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 11:12 am:
That... Was... I Don't Know... I'm Speechless... It Was Truely Amazing... And, I'll Be Sure To Remember This Song.(:
 
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travelbuff13 said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 9:57 am:
That is just........ I am speechless
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 8:22 pm :
Hey just wanted to personally thank you for putting my song on your favorites, that is such an honor! :D Oh and I also saw that you just created an account on here, so Welcome!! :D ♥
 
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