You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Apr. 1 2012 at 8:59 pm
 Hi! Aw thank you! :) Yes, you can! If it's ok could you record it and put it on youtube or something so i could see it! :) thanks!

Sydney Mead said...
on Mar. 14 2012 at 7:18 pm
Sydney Mead, Monuntgomrey, Alabama
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

you write a great song!  i wanted to ask you though. well im in a band and i wanted to know if i could use this song for my band?!! dont worry we  wont take credit for the song we will say that you wrote the song not us. because i know that i would hate if someone toke credit for a song that i wrote. reply to me with your awnser soon. :)

Keep up the good work. ;)

 


on Mar. 12 2012 at 6:09 pm
TheKayster BRONZE, Falmouth, Maine
2 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You miss 100% of the shots you don't take"

agree!!!

 


on Mar. 10 2012 at 2:51 pm
MiaUnwritten GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
11 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let the eyes seek what the mind cannot
Let the eyes judge what the mind cannot
Let the eyes believe what the mind failed to"

Awesome work, keep it up!

on Mar. 3 2012 at 11:42 am
Reignbow.Rebel BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"MY DOLLY IS GOING TO DIE!!!!"~Alex Sawyer

Beautiful! Great job! It flowed perfectly! :D

on Feb. 12 2012 at 6:28 am
its.paigee BRONZE, Ada, Oklahoma
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Promise yourself to be so strong that nothing can disturb your peace of mind. Look at the sunny side of everything and make optimism come true. Give so much time to the improvement of youself that you have no time to criticize others."

I love the message!

on Feb. 10 2012 at 5:34 pm
laurensoccer SILVER, Palm Beach Gardens, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 67 comments
So touching and amazing!!!! i love these lyrics. The rhyme adds a bit of structure and the flow of words is beautiful. you are very talented. Keep writing!!!!

james14 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 10 2012 at 2:21 pm
james14 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
1 article 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Worst excuse for not turning in homework: 'I couldn't find anyone to copy it from'".

this is really beautiful!!! great job!!!!!!!

on Jan. 19 2012 at 2:47 pm
Sammy817 BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can't break what is already broken

Beautiful!! I really liked it(:

on Jan. 13 2012 at 8:32 am
xxthemorriganxx, Mission, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our fingerprints never fade from the lives we touch"
"If things were easy to find, they wouldn't be worth finding."

I really like your song. It's very good, keep doing what you're doing.

liloxD said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 7:33 pm
liloxD, Amman, Other
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"ExPeCt ThE uNeXpEcTaBlE "

"if ur imagination is limited then ur life is limited as well" (true story xP )

keep it up ! amazing lyrics :)

Kim Ross said...
on Dec. 28 2011 at 9:02 am
Kim Ross, Vidor, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments
its not bad

on Dec. 16 2011 at 4:25 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Good song~ I usually don't read song lyrics but I liked yours.

on Dec. 6 2011 at 11:49 am
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
30 articles 17 photos 101 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end, it's still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what's available. It's still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who's around. It's still best to wait for the right person, because life's too short to waste on the wrong one."

This was awesome!! I really enjoyed reading it. 

on Nov. 17 2011 at 11:57 am
DarkenAngel94 SILVER, Teachey, North Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What?!?!Dude really??"
"Don't walk in front of me, for i may not follow,
Don't walk behind me, for i may not lead,
But walk beside me and just be my friend."
"You may not know me dont let my name come out of your month, unless your talkin to me"

I really loved this song thought try next to to get the beat in it i had a hard timw pickin a beat up the lyrics are good, i also write songs too so i know how hard it is practice is all it takes. For it being your first one ever, you did awseome! No lie about that

on Nov. 14 2011 at 1:02 pm
heather_marie PLATINUM, Deshler, Ohio
21 articles 2 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was a choice, but falling in love with you was beyond my control

this is really good. i hope you don't mind but i read your song in my poetry group at school; so beutifully written:)

on Nov. 14 2011 at 7:28 am
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.
—Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

This would make a great song! If you sing it and post it on YouTube, I bet you'll get tons of hits!

on Oct. 10 2011 at 6:36 pm
Thank you All so much for your encouraging comments! It means soo much to me! And I'm going to hopefully put a video of me singing this song soon, so stay tuned. :) Luv you all sooo much!!!

on Oct. 3 2011 at 8:23 pm
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
smile at the world and it will smile back

love it!!!!!! that is an awsome song. now if you can sing that, that would be even more amazing. keep up the good work!

on Oct. 3 2011 at 7:32 pm
xEmmiiix BRONZE, East Meadow, New York
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments
Im so in love with this that I rated 5 stars for the 20th time. This is amazing




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