You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Jun. 28 2013 at 9:33 pm
oliviajocson SILVER, Normal, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Learning to love the process."

Awww this is so sweet. Great job! I'd love to hear this someday!

on Jun. 8 2013 at 10:54 am
smiileyface18, Allendale, Michigan
0 articles 3 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work pays off!

I want to sing this!! Very good job!

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2013 at 8:44 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
1 article 0 photos 406 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

beautifullll

lovebabe13 said...
on Apr. 25 2013 at 9:32 am
Is this song actually about God?? or was it meant to be about someone else?? This is really good either way(: Keep writting!!! <3

bubbliee1 said...
on Apr. 23 2013 at 1:16 pm
If you do make that video, please send the link to me :)

on Mar. 27 2013 at 6:32 pm
KenziAutumn SILVER, Erwin, North Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not afraid of storms for I am learning how to sail my ship." ~ Louisa May Alcott

I am obsessed with this song! Would you be okay if i did a cover of it and put it on Youtube? I will give you credit for writing it.

Jereeka said...
on Feb. 19 2013 at 6:56 am
Jereeka, Barrigada, Other
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
Your song reminds me of someone and it gives me hope :)

on Dec. 19 2012 at 8:49 pm
Toriterror GOLD, Malabar, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What would you attempt to do if you knew you could not fail?"-Robert H. Shuller

completely agree! good to know there are god loving people on this great site :)

on Oct. 9 2012 at 9:32 am
chriskabz PLATINUM, Nairobi, Other
22 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hebrews13:10

How I once thought that no teen would ever discover that The Lord is good and that His kindness is simply unconditional and imeasurable to all! Wonderful song!

on Sep. 26 2012 at 5:00 pm
aw thanks! :) 

on Sep. 19 2012 at 9:06 am
Do you know that it is high time to get the loan, which will make your dreams come true.

on Sep. 17 2012 at 6:44 pm
CelebrateDifferences, Long Island, New York
0 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Gods of Olympus.” Piper stared at Leo. “What happened to you?”
His hair was greased back. He had welding goggles on his forehead, a lipstick mark on his cheek, tattoos all over his arms, and a T-shirt that read HOT STUFF, BAD BOY, and TEAM LEO.
“Long story,” he said.”

Truly Inspirational!  

on Jul. 13 2012 at 5:09 pm
lol, I wasn't with anyone when i wrote this. 

on Jul. 13 2012 at 5:08 pm
Aww, thanks so much!!

on Jul. 13 2012 at 5:08 pm
Thank you! :) 

on Jun. 21 2012 at 7:31 am
shayKittyFlcoka GOLD, Blockingham, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't give my emtions to people who dont matter to me. you cant make me angry, happy, sad, or watever unless you count.

i loved this..wish someone would be there for me like tht! great job!

 


on May. 30 2012 at 8:43 am
xximjustmexx PLATINUM, Oak Forest, Illinois
46 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
There's no god. There's no religion. There's only life, what you do with YOUR life, who YOU let affect YOUR life. Bad things happen to everyone, you just have to learn to deal with them.

this was very meaningful, for i can relate. you have real talent! keep writing!!

on Apr. 16 2012 at 1:10 pm
I'm just wondering are you still with the guy you were with when you wrote this?

Gee-Gee SILVER said...
on Apr. 16 2012 at 10:07 am
Gee-Gee SILVER, MarkedTree, Arkansas
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you dont like me get over it

this was great :) keep it up

on Apr. 11 2012 at 7:46 am
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.
—Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

Great song - I really love it! ;)

If you have any extra time, could you check out my somg "Fly Away"? Feedback would be extrememly appriciated.





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