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You're Mine

Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!




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Blackrosechick said...
Sept. 17, 2011 at 5:18 pm:
This is amazing!!! <33333
 
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jaque1995 said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 8:57 am:
omg i love this poem you are the best :)
 
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sunnyallday said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 8:53 am:
this is amaazing!!! especially for ur first song :) keep writing!
 
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yeahrigh1992 said...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 9:53 am:
I love the religious connotation. Fabulous job.
 
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Janeyy said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 3:11 pm:
Aww, so cute! Really good for your first song!
 
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TheNovaClytie said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 11:22 pm:
i can so hear the kings of leon singing this :)
 
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David.DZE said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 1:35 pm:
Amazing job.  It is soft and comforting and true in many ways.
 
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riley1516 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 2:02 pm:
Nice job! my favorite part is verse 1 its absolutely beautiful! keep it up
 
jaymishae replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 3:30 pm :

I love this soooooooooooooo much. i have an idea on how to put music to this. do i ahve permission?

 

 
Distant_Dreamer replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 2:10 pm :
Hey everyone! Thanks for the great comments!! I'm so glad you all like this song! :) To jaymishae-you are too kind. :) thanks, and yes you have my permission, but i want to hear it once u have it done kk?! :) thanks again!
 
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Shortblueeyes224 said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 2:13 am:
Very well done!!
 
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wildflower92 said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 8:43 pm:
This is reallly good can i have permission to do a cover to this song and write chords and notes for it ?
 
Distant_Dreamer replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 2:12 pm :
thanks! Yup you have my permission, could u send me the chords and stuff after, i would love to see it. thanks ;)
 
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HannahD26 said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 8:12 pm:
Great! Just amazing! I loved it! I''m so suprised that this is only ur first song! Its great it rly is! Keep writing! I wanna read and maybe hear more!
 
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Dia.dreamer123 said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 10:34 am:
Wow this is awesome...I read it out loud and found myself singing a whole new tune just like that!! I can't believe this is really your first song!
 
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B-Artistic said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 3:12 am:
the song you wrote is very impactful and beautiful, keep trying , keep writing, keep getting better... Best Wishes
 
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Jame_alexx said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 11:25 pm:
that was beautiful i loved it so much keep up the good work
 
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Though_Heart said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 12:33 pm:
This is UBER GOOD!!! best song I've read so far
 
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karash10397 said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 12:16 pm:

This is good ..... 


 
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sportsycrystal said...
May 30, 2011 at 8:30 am:

I really love this... and i really like your name btw i think it really stands out to every dreamer and writer here

 

 
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