You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Oct. 9 2014 at 2:04 pm
you are a brilliant writer i sung this song to my song and she loved it thank you very much 

on Sep. 12 2014 at 12:42 pm
MarquashaColeman BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
This was really good and i like the way that u written it. you should really get out there! keep up the good work 

on May. 17 2014 at 9:52 pm
Layla.Malark BRONZE, Missoula, Montana
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a piano,
The white keys represent happieness,
The black keys represent sadness,
You need both to mae music.

It's beautifully written i have never heard anything so beautiful

4nscchk666 said...
on Apr. 24 2014 at 12:50 pm
4nscchk666, Cincinnati, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 4 comments
beautifully written. never stop. can't wait to see more 

Genesis_ said...
on Apr. 21 2014 at 12:33 pm
Genesis_, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
We accept the love we think we deserve

Good song ! 

Babybelle10 said...
on Apr. 19 2014 at 3:10 pm
Best song ever. Let me know if you need a singer. I a, 12

on Apr. 18 2014 at 6:43 pm
Passionate_Writer, Danbury, Connecticut
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
I Like this quote “Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand.”

I thought this was really great. Never stop writing.

on Mar. 24 2014 at 12:11 pm
I just want to say thank you to everyone for all the sweet comments! :) I'm so glad you like it, and i'll do my best to write more! <3 Unfortunately, i'm having trouble signing in to my account, but i'm trying to find a way to, but in the meantime, take care and i'll actually try to post a video of me singing this, so stay tuned! :) <3

on Mar. 24 2014 at 12:10 pm
Aww thank you soo much!!! Of course you can! :) please send me a link if you ever do a cover :) i'll hopefulyy post a video myself of this song, so stay tuned :)

JadeKae SILVER said...
on Feb. 19 2014 at 6:24 pm
JadeKae SILVER, Jonesville, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Your Dreams

This song was amazing!  Please post more :)

suman said...
on Jan. 26 2014 at 3:18 am
its very good.Loved it!!!!

on Nov. 27 2013 at 6:19 pm
LostInThoughts BRONZE, Heath Springs, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People haven't always been there for me, but music always has!!" -Taylor Swift

Being a song writer myself I think this is the best song I have ever heard for it being the first one. Amazing!! You turly have a talent!! Plus the fact you are also prizing the Lord makes the song ever better. Excellent Job!! :) :) :) Keep writing!! I hope one day to buy you songs off iTunes!!!

on Nov. 21 2013 at 3:32 pm
AloneandFree SILVER, Williamston, South Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Rise above the storm and you will find the sunshine.
-Mario Fernandez

Great job!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!
 

CountryProud said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 8:16 pm
CountryProud, Montpelier, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
im a country music listenin dirt road ridin camo wearin southern sassin country girl :)

i loved it!!!!! you are amazin :) keep doin what ur doin 

Razzy said...
on Oct. 18 2013 at 4:27 pm
Razzy, Somewhere, California
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What great thing would you attempt if you knew you could not fail?" ~Robert H. Schuller

This is such a sweet song. You did really well! :)

on Oct. 10 2013 at 8:57 pm
Tonnetta BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Be a leader not a follower.
-Stay on the right side of the road in life.
- I anit picture perfect but i'm worth the picture still.

This so is amazing. I really like it. I actually write songs myself. I will hope you will comment & rate it.  I will post soon But your song is beautiful. :) Time to sing it. :)

on Sep. 13 2013 at 1:35 pm
KhrystalBriezee, Tompson, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Pick Ur Head UP Princess Ur Tiera Is Falling((:

UR AMAZEING!!!((:<333  

on Sep. 1 2013 at 3:32 pm
WallFlowerAlice GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why wait when you only live once? Go out there dance, smile, and enjoy yourself! If your not having fun then darling your doing something wrong!"
- Therese

"Aww... this is so cute i've gotta spread the word, love is really beautiful well done, "Said Alison.

jacobo 13 said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 10:23 am
i love this video too

on Jul. 1 2013 at 10:50 pm
Keep_Calm_May27 BRONZE, Camden, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness that most frightens us. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? You are a child of God. Your playing small does not serve the world. There is nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other people won't feel insecure around you. We are all meant to shine, as children do. We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same. As we are liberated from our own fear, our presence automatically liberates others-

This was amazing!!!




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