You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Oct. 3 2009 at 10:56 pm
Love_Kills_the_Blind PLATINUM, Fort Collins, Colorado
23 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never regret anything, at one point its exactly what you wanted."

wow that is really really good!!! it was really hope inspiring too! one of the best i've read!

on Oct. 3 2009 at 5:54 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much!!!!!!!! :) I will someday hopfully! :)

on Oct. 3 2009 at 5:47 pm
Actresspoet123, Anchorage, Alaska
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If you have music 4 it, you should post in on Utube! i love it

on Oct. 3 2009 at 4:24 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you!!! I have to tune in my head a little bit, but no written sheet music, at least not yet. I'm glad you like it!!! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!

God Bless!

on Oct. 3 2009 at 4:22 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much! I hoped that someone could take this to heart! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! :)

TaylorC SILVER said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 2:11 pm
TaylorC SILVER, Lubbock, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments
I love it! it is so well written and it speaks to me so much! do you have music for it? IT is absolutely amazing. Keep it up.

lilwardy said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 1:08 pm
yeah that'd be great! my pastor like "Your Mine"

on Oct. 3 2009 at 10:33 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks! Yea, this is actually my very first song that I've written! Thanks, If I haven't checked out your work, I'll be sure to very soon! Thanks for commenting! :)

on Oct. 3 2009 at 9:58 am
Rapid_Flamingo BRONZE, Friggin Iceberg, Other
1 article 0 photos 4 comments
Very good!, and your first song too??? It's very well written. You should to write more songs. :)

on Oct. 3 2009 at 7:43 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so MUCH!!!! I'm so glad you like it!! I actually have written more, so if you want I can put another one on! :)

INnaturegirl said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 10:36 pm
awww this i sbeautiful! i love it!!!!! u should deff. write more!!!!!!!!

on Oct. 2 2009 at 6:37 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me

That song is amazing! It has a meaning that I can decode in my own life.

lilwardy said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:33 am
yeah, no prob.

on Oct. 2 2009 at 5:32 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Hi Lauren! I'm so glad you like my song! Yes, of course you can! Could you tell me what he thinks of it too? :)

lilwardy said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 11:23 pm
ney, I'm Lauren i live in AZ and i really like the song! I was wondering if i could use these lyrics and give to my pastor. I too am a songwritter, and singer, and composer. plz answer really great song

on Oct. 1 2009 at 6:04 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you, I'm so happy that a lot of people like it because being my first song, i had doubts, but thank you for taking the time to comment!!! :)

on Oct. 1 2009 at 6:04 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much, I'm so hapy you liked it!!!! :)

on Oct. 1 2009 at 12:04 pm
kendraelysia SILVER, Turner, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To risk nothing is to risk everything."

Very well done. I enjoyed this a lot. :)

on Oct. 1 2009 at 11:23 am
diis iis really guud

ii liik iit :)

BabyDoll said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 10:16 am
wow that was amazing, as i as i was reading i could hear the beat and everything. It was amazing.


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