You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Nov. 6 2009 at 10:25 pm
Miss_Bliss GOLD, Waban, Massachusetts
17 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If we did all the things we were capable of, we would literally astound ourselves."

-Thomas Edison

Just submitted my first song, too... Really good job!

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 9:29 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

:) i have read a lot of your writing. You are really good!!! Are you gonna publish any pieces?

on Nov. 6 2009 at 8:42 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I've only been on here for about 1 year total or close to that! Lol :) Well, I'll be sure to check out your work, I bet it's Awesome!!! :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 8:32 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

I dont have any posted yet. The editor has to read them

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 8:30 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

That's cool. I've submitted like ten pieces of writing. :) How long have you been on teen ink?

on Nov. 6 2009 at 7:11 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

My names Monica, and I'm in the 9th grade! :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 6:41 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Lauren :) im in 8th grade. how about you?

on Nov. 6 2009 at 12:41 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Well, it can take 2 weeks to a month or two, it just depends on the editor of teenink, or whoever is checking over your work. Thanks, Btw, what's your name? Mines Monica :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 9:04 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Im new to this site so i am curious. How long does it take them to post your work on the site? Btw once again i luv the song.

on Nov. 5 2009 at 6:22 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 1:37 am
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Oh my gosh that song is good!!!! you could go pro. I wold definitely buy a CD with that song i luved it!!!!!

on Oct. 26 2009 at 7:36 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much! Like I said I LOVE your work... all of it!! :)

To God be the glory!!!

on Oct. 26 2009 at 7:34 pm
BabyRanger_2010 SILVER, Dumas, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no doubt that knowing someone in the business will get you in the door. But it is your talent that will keep you in the room." -Vic Mignogna

I love it!! This is truly a word from God!!! It was very moving!!

on Oct. 13 2009 at 12:33 pm
amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
33 articles 2 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let anybody tell you who you are; don't let anyone tell you that you don't deserve what you're willing to work for.
Never give up; you\'ll never know how far you could go until you try to get to where you want to go.

Hey, this was really good...I liked it alot :) It's deep but very powerful... you should rate/comment mine too! "Never Underestimate a Girl"-i think it's number 6???

on Oct. 6 2009 at 4:52 pm
Lisette-Midnight SILVER, New York, New York
7 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for the moment you can't put in words.

You did a wonderful job i was smiling as i read it.

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 6:57 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

i am speechless it was amazing

on Oct. 5 2009 at 4:22 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 377 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Oh yah, your second post on the front page!!!! Awesome, Monica, you're too amazing for me!

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 2:10 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

This song was a-ma-zing!!! i loved it sooo much, you should deff write more songs...wow

on Oct. 5 2009 at 1:12 pm
Teiralovessugar SILVER, Sweet Home, Oregon
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Never Underestimate the Power of LOVE!"

I like it alot

on Oct. 4 2009 at 7:24 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you!!!!




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