You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:28 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I had a BIG blonde moment, I know what I did wrong! Lol Haha :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:27 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

haha i was talking about when u said it qould show up as jim lol

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:26 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

did u use the at symbol instead of the word at?

on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:25 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Huh? Lol :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:24 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

okay :) in my contact i will change it to monica :)

on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:24 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

It wont let me send you an email because it said that the email address isn't valid. :(

on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:19 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Okay, I'll email you now, see if it works! It will go under the name Jim because that's my dad's name and we have a family type email. ;)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:17 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

yay! it worked :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:16 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

thats the only way i could type it without deleting it

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:12 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Ahhh!! Same here lol:) its probably cuz its an email.

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:10 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

where do u live? i live in oregon :)

on Nov. 8 2009 at 11:57 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Hey! Wow, exciting!!! I tried to give you the email, but the teenink people deleted my comment. :( Try your's! :) Hope you have a great Sunday! :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 11:31 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

I am so excited for tomorrow!!!!! I get to find out if I made the team. (I think I did.) :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 9:12 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Ya Tell me urs and I willl send u an email. :)

on Nov. 7 2009 at 3:38 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Really! I play volleyball, it's really fun! :) I'm sure you will!! Hey, do u have an email, so we could chat? :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 2:01 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Pretty good so far. I have volleyball tryouts today at 1-3. I was on varsity before so I am pretty good. I hope I make it. Fingers Crossed. :)

on Nov. 7 2009 at 1:59 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I know, I can't wait either, I know I'll love them!! :) How's your weekend going?

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 1:57 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

You're Mine and Someone who cared. I can't wait for you to read my stuff I wish they would come already. :)

on Nov. 7 2009 at 7:32 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Maybe, which one's do you like the best? :)

on Nov. 7 2009 at 7:32 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks! :) I'll be sure to check it out! :)




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