You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Jun. 21 2016 at 3:54 pm
YoungBeauty GOLD, Claremont, New Hampshire
10 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Beauty isn't about having pretty face. It's about having a pretty mind, a pretty heart, and a pretty soul"

Please tell me that you are going to sing this. I love this song and think it is very beautiful. Full with passion and so much spirit!

DaleJ said...
on Jun. 20 2016 at 10:55 am
DaleJ, Upper Darby, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"After all, we are nothing more or less than what we choose to reveal."-Frank Underwood

great song

KimyaT. GOLD said...
on May. 29 2016 at 10:45 am
KimyaT. GOLD, Cleveland, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments
Are you going to sing this/record this?

rcs21 BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2016 at 4:50 pm
rcs21 BRONZE, Hartland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 4 comments
:) great job!!!!!!

Gary28 said...
on May. 4 2016 at 12:30 pm
Gary28,
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Really like the song it was good.

on Apr. 7 2016 at 10:14 am
JeffMusic BRONZE, Culpeper, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself, its about creating yourself.

Amazing song. I loved it

on Apr. 5 2016 at 2:37 pm
daydreamer67 SILVER, Grahamsville, New York
8 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let people keep you down, always look for good in each and every situation.

i love your song. It really means something. love it. keep making more!(:

on Mar. 24 2016 at 4:51 pm
kiwi-dictatorship BRONZE, Centreville, Virginia
2 articles 3 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And in the end, we were all just humans, drunk on the idea that love, only love, could heal our brokenness."

nice job! I like it

Motivate_Me said...
on Feb. 8 2016 at 11:16 pm
That's great! always feels awesome to write and finish you're first song it's tough getting started shoot I still struggle with it and I've been attempting and working at it for nearly 4 years... I'm gonna be honest please don't take it personal I'm just trying to help ya get better wish someone did this for me starting out, ok so with you're song the message is clear which is good! One thing you could work on is rhymes like try not to use the same word use a word that rhymes you did a couple times but it stood out to me you just used the same word instead of rhyme but maybe it's you're style not saying it needs to be that way to work but it really makes it a little more catchy but all in all great song keep up the good work truly only way to get better is to keep writing and getting advice helps too! Just don't get up from this song I sense potential (:

on Jan. 28 2016 at 12:56 pm
cjfantastic2002,
0 articles 0 photos 4 comments
Your song is very beautiful I mean it really says something to the reader.....

on Dec. 15 2015 at 9:39 pm
_sidney.tyler SILVER, Columbus, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if I had to perish twice
I think I know enough of hate,
To say that for destruction ice,
Is also great.
And would suffice.

Ugh I would love to sing this like wow. I think I will. Amazing lyrics. I will think of a melody haha. Of course goving you credit. Not that I would publish it lol.

on Nov. 23 2015 at 2:53 pm
WinterMarie SILVER, Delton, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is not enough darkness in the world to put out the light of one single candle.

This is really good! Wow i cant stop rereading it.

Ycgc7 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 10 2015 at 12:44 pm
Ycgc7 BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
3 articles 2 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
a strength so big, faith so strong & a mind fully set on for the best that's yet to come

very inspirational i love it

pugwug2000 said...
on Oct. 17 2015 at 11:49 pm
This was very interesting, I enjoyed it.

on Oct. 17 2015 at 11:30 pm
Josslyco BRONZE, New York, NY, New York
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Stop focusing on how stressed you are and remember how blessed you are. It could be so much worse."

Thank you so much. I really do appreciate the comments and that people have actually read my work. And yes I feel so much better after letting everything out and moving on with my life even thought its hard to look back.

DamonSimpson said...
on Sep. 12 2015 at 12:28 am
Hey can I trade verses with yhu I have something that will fix it

on Mar. 25 2015 at 2:48 pm
Kelli_2011 DIAMOND, Fillmore, California
88 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
this too shall pass

Love it so much of course it about the lord and I love it

Embrace GOLD said...
on Mar. 24 2015 at 11:33 am
Embrace GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anything is possible with a little faith put on forth .

You have made a magnificent song . I believe you and you're work is beautiful job well done mate ! I hope i have the courage to one day do the same.

Mollymawk said...
on Jan. 6 2015 at 9:59 am
Can I write music for these lyrics? THey're beautiful!

on Dec. 18 2014 at 12:35 pm
you really are brilliant your writing is amazing, but mostly your song lyrics.


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