You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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Nt111193 said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 5:31 pm
I can so totally hear that on the radio

on Nov. 19 2009 at 3:35 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself!!!

LOVE IT!!! Keep it coming

on Nov. 19 2009 at 2:28 pm
ms.long4eva SILVER, Des Moines, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
If life gives you fabric, make a clothing line.

WOW! Great stuff. OMG!

on Nov. 18 2009 at 5:31 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Cool! :) Well, when they come on TeenInk, give me a shout out, and I'll look at them! :) Btw, WELCOME!! Lol :)

on Nov. 18 2009 at 5:14 pm
--Morganne[: SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
5 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the times when you feel like life is over is when you grow the strongest.

I was reading your comments and it seems we are the same age lol. My name is Morganne. I'm new to this site and I have about five or six poems/songs still being reviewed or whatever lol

on Nov. 18 2009 at 12:05 pm
Mitchell SILVER, Roebuck, South Carolina
5 articles 7 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Speak what you think now in words as hard as cannonballs and tomorrow speak what tomorrow thinks in hard words again, though it contradict everything you said today.

Awesome!!!!

Sunga BRONZE said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 11:25 am
Sunga BRONZE, Indinapolis, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"some people say that life is gone and dead but i believe that u can find something right in front of
you"

-Unknown

I LOVE IT!!!

on Nov. 17 2009 at 8:41 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks so much!!!! You realy like it?

linds said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 8:54 am
I like this!! It has good emotions in this!

on Nov. 9 2009 at 6:41 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks! :)

on Nov. 9 2009 at 10:43 am
haltman14 BRONZE, Roslyn, New York
2 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A lot of people are afraid of heights. Not me, I'm afraid of widths."
Steven Wright

C_O_O_L

on Nov. 8 2009 at 9:25 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Sure, I will, probally tomorrow! Thanks so much!!! :)

on Nov. 8 2009 at 9:08 pm
ariwrites94 GOLD, Deltona, Florida
17 articles 4 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." ---Plato

Wonderful job!!!! you are a talented writer and keep up the good work! if u have time please check out my poem called "Sensitive Am I" and rate and leave a comment. Thanks and keep writing!

on Nov. 8 2009 at 1:09 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Sure! :) Lets do it~ Can't wait either! Lol :)

on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:33 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Yea!!!!!!!!!! :)

on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:32 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

What do you mean? Lol :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:31 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

yup :) i got it

on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:30 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Yea, I sent you an emai, see if it got to you! :)

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:30 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

lol :D what did u do?

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:29 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

ya. but since it wont let u type emails i pu the word at instead of the symbol at. did u change at into that symbol?


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