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You're Mine

Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!



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walter said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 1:21 am:
wow, that was really good. do u have music 2 go with it?
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 8:54 am :
Not really. But hey, if you want to put music to it, be my guest! Lol :) Thanks for the comment! Btw, happy new years!!
 
walter replied...
Jan. 2, 2010 at 1:28 pm :
I'll c what I can do. XD what kinda song is it? rock, pop, country, etc.
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Jan. 2, 2010 at 3:02 pm :
It's contemporary Christian Gospel. :) O.K, thanks!!!!
 
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400king said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 10:57 am:
some lines are too long compared to other lines so the flow doesn't really work. if you were gonna do like short/ long then you would have to continue that pattern or make one long line into like two seperate ones.
 
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God my strength said...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 3:36 pm:
Tat ws realy good I write my self i have a whole of poems ive written bt they gt missed placed btkeep it up the good work u gt talent
 
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Writer12 said...
Dec. 24, 2009 at 2:42 pm:
I really like it
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Dec. 24, 2009 at 4:05 pm :
Thank you so much!!!! :) Merry Christmas!
 
Writer12 replied...
Dec. 30, 2009 at 10:17 am :
I do alot of writing. I use music in my books alot. I really like your song and I was hoping you would allow me to use this song in my book.
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Dec. 30, 2009 at 7:00 pm :
Yes, sure!!! :) Thanks again!!
 
Writer12 replied...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 10:20 am :
Thank you so much. I will make sure people know that you wrote that song. Thanks!!!
 
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wifey said...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 11:48 am:
im a producer myself and i like it
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 1:11 pm :
Thank you all soooooo MUCH for your sweet comments! :) I'll try to check out all of your work! :) Happy Holidays!
 
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montana said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 8:31 pm:
This is your first song? I hope u write more. Do u think u can comment on my work thx.
 
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Marissa D. said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 8:40 am:
i liked it a lot i feel when i read this i could reallly trust you would be there
 
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Deanna T. said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 7:47 am:
I love this !
 
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Rhianna P. said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 7:29 am:
and it inspired me
 
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Rhianna P. said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 7:29 am:
oh my gosh that song was great it got to me.I love it.
 
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PoertyArtist said...
Dec. 19, 2009 at 12:05 pm:
wow this is really good! i write to and boy did you inspire me!<3 thanks and keep writing your obviously gifted
 
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Barnes*is*here said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 10:39 pm:
God bless. You inspire me, hey, keep it up.
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 3:37 pm :
Thanks so much!!! :)
 
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