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You're Mine

Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!



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adristar96 said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 8:21 pm
i really like it :) i have some stuff up if you'd like to see and comment
 
OneGodForever32This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 11:43 am
This is very good! :) Please check out some of my work... I love the feedback! :)
 
stephers said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 6:29 pm
really like this...check out some of my stuff and let me know what you think? i cant really write lyrics very well though):
 
ahhhhhhhhhh said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 7:40 am
i love it can i sing it for you!!!!!!!!! lol
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 8:13 am
Sure! Lol :) Thanks so much!!! :)
 
love2love17 said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 10:08 pm
Hey does this song have a melody? I would love to sing it! You are very talented, I love the message of this song!!
 
notebookgirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 10:24 pm
I loved your song and admire you for writing it because I can do poetry, fiction, essays, pretty much anything if not perfectly but I tried to write a song and I couldn't even do a decent corus so you've done better than I ever will :)
 
creativemind said...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 10:23 pm
hey good job! love it!
 
Pillow said...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 6:45 pm
I loved your song. I wish I knew the melody so I could sing it for my friends. Wonderful job.
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 5:59 pm
Thanks so much!
 
dawnlight411 said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 4:54 pm
This is a interesting poem because its a song that is a poem, which are also like raps, and its saying how love is in an interesting way.
 
ButtercupBby said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 8:50 am
Love the song (: especially the chorus
 
distant_dreamer said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 7:15 pm
thank you ALL for your supportive and kind comments it means SO much to me!!! I LOVE hearing from you all!!! :) THANKS AGAIN, YOU GUYS ARE THE GREATEST!!!!!!!
Love,
distant_dreamer!
 
ZiRaww! said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 5:46 pm
The chorus is soooo cute i can't stop saying it in my head!!!
 
LOGAN said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 10:27 am
this song is pretty good.i liked it.
i want to here this with its own beat.
 
hotchick15 replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 11:24 am
wow i think you are a really good writer and i love ur song!! i give it 5 stars... keep up the good work
 
Princess P said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 10:19 am
i really liked this poem mostly be cause i like to write music also. plus i can relate to what she wrote about
 
gustavo said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 7:43 am
awesome song 10/10
 
Cylas P. said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 9:02 am
This is amazing! Is it like a love song?
It is almost "Emo", but in the end it totally brings you up again.
I love the mixed emotions.
 
JessicaBby said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 2:31 pm
:) i love itt
 
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