You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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Snow_White said...
on May. 31 2010 at 1:36 pm
omg this song like blew me away..i even sang it out loud and it sounded just...amazing! good job! :)

on May. 13 2010 at 9:50 pm
smiley10507 PLATINUM, Fairview Heights, Illinois
22 articles 5 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't put off 'til tomorrow what you can do today for today is yesterday's tomorrow."

plain amazing! for this to be your first song, you did a really good job

on May. 13 2010 at 6:45 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

WOW! Absolutely AMAZING! I would be honored if you looked at my poems and rated them and told me wat you think! =D

on May. 13 2010 at 6:01 pm
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
30 articles 0 photos 75 comments
You have SERIOUS TALENT! u could totally sell these r something. plz! write more.

on Apr. 26 2010 at 5:40 pm
Wannabewriter BRONZE, Kingston, Other
3 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
TONS OF FUN!

Wow! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!! If that's only your first song, than write MORE because I think you could totally get into business! ;) :P  :D

on Apr. 21 2010 at 5:23 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

I'm going to tell exactly how moving your song is right now: it was so moving that it made me cry. Seriously. I love this so much. Make sure you keep writing; it's definitely for you. :)

Echo16 SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 4:17 pm
Echo16 SILVER, Gainesville, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont let the life you were born into define you, but let your dreams and passions drive you to greatness.

Wow you are a song writer. That song is so powerful. I think you should put music to it and put it on youtube. Keep on writing.

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:59 am
you have the makings of a songwriter! I loved it! keep writing!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:18 am
family_includes_I GOLD, Sciliy, Other
14 articles 12 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can only be young once, but you can always be immature"

i luv it:)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 5:52 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

I agree with J.B. Rockz, you should put it on youtube! I honsetly love the poem.(sorry bout the spelling) XD

 


on Apr. 21 2010 at 1:57 am
Lost4Ever SILVER, Patna, Other
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments
god..its so gud!!!

on Apr. 18 2010 at 3:39 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

ok, but this is a Christian song, not a love song! :)

on Apr. 18 2010 at 3:28 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
23 articles 0 photos 99 comments
aww how  cute, say yes say yes!!! that would so win me over lol. good luck on winning the girl.

J.B. Rockz! said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 4:46 pm

I love your song and i think you should put it on youtube so other people can love it to. 

You should write more songs 


on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:08 pm
WonderDreamer23 BRONZE, Maplewood, Minnesota
1 article 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shut Up and Live I am the most sexiest thing that happened to you and i know you know it.

yalith good luck hahah and this is a GREAT song i love it and God bless:)

Yalith BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 8:51 am
Yalith BRONZE, Ottumwa, Iowa
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is a lie; I trust hate."

"The pain of having a broken heart is not so much as to kill you, yet not so little as to let you live."

"You don’t realize how much you care about someone until they don’t care about you."

i like this song. i was wondering if u'd let me put some music to it and sing it to the girl i'm trying to win

xbox said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 9:26 am
this is good

on Mar. 28 2010 at 7:16 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so Much!!!! It means more than anything to get uplifting and positive comments, so I thank you and I will keep wiriting! :) Thanks so much!!!!! <3 God Bless!!

on Mar. 28 2010 at 6:50 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

it is rare that one is able to capture the emotions of anyting in writing like you so often do, the song tells everyone that your ability to write and still keep the emotion alive is very strong, its an area that you should keep very well used and never let dull, because if you let it dull it will never again be a sharp, keep on writing, and dont stop.

 


on Mar. 15 2010 at 2:56 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Yes, PLEASE DO!! I would love to see it too!!! :) Lol :) Thanks for your sweet comment!! :)


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