You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Jul. 18 2010 at 6:25 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much!!! :) You will soon, no worries.. Lol :)

on Jul. 17 2010 at 10:40 pm
Sammie_Shamrock PLATINUM, Holland, Michigan
29 articles 5 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just bury me in the memories" -Modern day escape

Awesome Song Dudette!!! im a song writer as well, and you have awesome potential! Keep it up!!! Love to hear more from you!

on Jul. 13 2010 at 3:02 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

well, like it or not, I don't really care, to me I think it rocks, and I don't care who thinks otherwise! I appreciate your comment though...

on Jul. 13 2010 at 2:46 pm
everthought BRONZE, Vancouver, Other
1 article 13 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"forever is the new now"
-anonymous

Oh my, this song is extremely typical. nothing new!

on Jul. 7 2010 at 7:17 am
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why does everyone think I need a man? Look if you find a guy who is decent, good with kids and has respect for women, call me." "It is better to have loved, than to have never loved at all."

cool song. i really like this one.

on Jul. 3 2010 at 9:41 pm
emmilove24 BRONZE, Erlanger, Kentucky
3 articles 13 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"True strength is holding yourself together, when everyone expects you to fall apart."

this song blew me away. honestly it did.  it inspired me.  I really love it <3

on Jul. 2 2010 at 3:42 pm
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
34 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth

wow you need to get this published some wasres or at lest coopy right it some how varry good love it !

on Jun. 26 2010 at 9:59 am
JocelynnTaylor GOLD, Templeton, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am a writer, and so I write.
I am a thinker, and so I think.
I am a human, and so I have human thoughts and feelings.

I love it I sang it outloud and it sounded like I could never believe.  And this is just the FIRST ONE!!!  You have a lot of potential so keep it up!! ^_^

on Jun. 26 2010 at 1:29 am
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
11 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dreaming is what makes the world go round"

could you please comment my song "Perfect guy" or rate please and thanks =) it would help A LOT

on Jun. 26 2010 at 1:28 am
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
11 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dreaming is what makes the world go round"

good job!! i loved it =) keep it up!

carebare96 said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 9:52 pm
This is amazing. I write songs too and this is one of those kind of songs where I wish that I wrote it. This is so good

on Jun. 8 2010 at 3:46 am
1COR13 PLATINUM, Anchor Point, Alaska
28 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace." - Jimmi Hendrix

I LIKE IT!

on Jun. 4 2010 at 4:16 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

thanks!!! Really what song is it and who is it by???? Thanks again!!!

lilyxoxo GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 3:20 pm
lilyxoxo GOLD, Springfeild, Massachusetts
12 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
love last forever as long as you dont lie or try to hide

i love it but just top warn you the frist 3 lines are also in a church song with the same name but all the rest pure gold

on Jun. 4 2010 at 2:55 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Hey! I'm so glad you like it! Yes, I'd loved to take a look at your work kjoiner11, and LifeintheBand, Do you think you could put a recording of it on youtube so I could just see it, and yes you have my permission as long as you give me credit for writing the song, and not to take credit for it! :) Thanks again!!!!! :)

on Jun. 4 2010 at 2:13 pm
  This is such a great song!  Me and my band were looking at it and wrote some notes for it.  With your premission I was wondering if we would be aloud to use this in one of our preformances?

on Jun. 4 2010 at 10:48 am
kjoiner11 SILVER, West Chester, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If ever there is tomorrow when we're not together.. there is something you must always remember. you are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think. but the most important thing is, even if we're apart.. i'll always be with you.”

hey this is really good could you look at my work and give me feed back id really like to u to comment cuz it sounds like you know what ur doing... everyone can look i cant feed back good or bad... thanks everyone

on Jun. 4 2010 at 10:47 am
kjoiner11 SILVER, West Chester, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If ever there is tomorrow when we're not together.. there is something you must always remember. you are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think. but the most important thing is, even if we're apart.. i'll always be with you.”

hey this is really good read my articles and tell me what you think it sounds like you know what your doing everyone can read my stuff i want feeed back!!!! thanks

on Jun. 3 2010 at 6:54 pm
CanYouSeeTheCrazy PLATINUM, Cle Elum, Washington
21 articles 0 photos 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know why everyone in this world is so desperate to find love."
"Oh yeah? Why then?"
"Because, it's the closest thing we have to magic."

i like it. i like it a lot. :)

on Jun. 2 2010 at 8:06 pm
MusingAlone BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Wow that is truely just an amazing song!

 



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