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You're Mine

Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!



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Snow_White said...
May 31, 2010 at 1:36 pm
omg this song like blew me away..i even sang it out loud and it sounded just...amazing! good job! :)
 
smiley10507 said...
May 13, 2010 at 9:50 pm
plain amazing! for this to be your first song, you did a really good job
 
bkcrider92 said...
May 13, 2010 at 6:45 pm
WOW! Absolutely AMAZING! I would be honored if you looked at my poems and rated them and told me wat you think! =D
 
BlueInk94 said...
May 13, 2010 at 6:01 pm
You have SERIOUS TALENT! u could totally sell these r something. plz! write more.
 
Wannabewriter said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 5:40 pm
Wow! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!! If that's only your first song, than write MORE because I think you could totally get into business! ;) :P  :D
 
WritingLoverForever said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 5:23 pm
I'm going to tell exactly how moving your song is right now: it was so moving that it made me cry. Seriously. I love this so much. Make sure you keep writing; it's definitely for you. :)
 
Echo16 said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 4:17 pm
Wow you are a song writer. That song is so powerful. I think you should put music to it and put it on youtube. Keep on writing.
 
ilovezacefron said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:59 am
you have the makings of a songwriter! I loved it! keep writing!
 
feverish_4_fun said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 8:18 am
i luv it:)
 
Moonbeam13 said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 5:52 am

I agree with J.B. Rockz, you should put it on youtube! I honsetly love the poem.(sorry bout the spelling) XD

 

 
Aishwarya S. said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 1:57 am
god..its so gud!!!
 
J.B. Rockz! said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 4:46 pm

I love your song and i think you should put it on youtube so other people can love it to. 

You should write more songs 

 
RayRay23 said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:08 pm
yalith good luck hahah and this is a GREAT song i love it and God bless:)
 
Yalith said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 8:51 am
i like this song. i was wondering if u'd let me put some music to it and sing it to the girl i'm trying to win
 
mitchinmyheart replied...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 3:28 pm
aww how  cute, say yes say yes!!! that would so win me over lol. good luck on winning the girl.
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 3:39 pm
ok, but this is a Christian song, not a love song! :)
 
windswift This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 6:50 pm

it is rare that one is able to capture the emotions of anyting in writing like you so often do, the song tells everyone that your ability to write and still keep the emotion alive is very strong, its an area that you should keep very well used and never let dull, because if you let it dull it will never again be a sharp, keep on writing, and dont stop.

 

 
distant_dreamer replied...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 7:16 pm
Thank you so Much!!!! It means more than anything to get uplifting and positive comments, so I thank you and I will keep wiriting! :) Thanks so much!!!!! <3 God Bless!!
 
stardreamer91 said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 2:21 pm
OMG I love this! You really have a talent! I'm in this intro to broadcast class and I was wondering if I could make a music video for this maybe?
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 2:56 pm
Yes, PLEASE DO!! I would love to see it too!!! :) Lol :) Thanks for your sweet comment!! :)
 
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