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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Oct. 17 2023 at 7:58 pm
Cutiepie10009, Newton, Massachusetts
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So nice I wish I could make songs like this as well !😃

on Aug. 19 2022 at 10:06 am
autumnvaldes62 BRONZE, Ossining, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Why fit in when you were born to stand out?

I loveeeee this!! Everything flows so well!

on Feb. 19 2022 at 8:54 pm
WhyWouldIKnow SILVER, A Real Place, Other
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@Goku_Nativeson you do be speaking truth...

on Feb. 17 2022 at 4:36 pm
Earned_Golden SILVER, Kooskia, Idaho
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment
this is amazing!!

on Dec. 13 2021 at 2:35 pm
SViswanadha1247, Concord, North Carolina
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this sounds good! im curious to see what it sounds like with music combined with it :)

HEIHEI22 said...
on Sep. 23 2021 at 12:39 pm
HEIHEI22, Lakeside City, Texas
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This is the best song I've ever heard

HEIHEI22 said...
on Sep. 23 2021 at 12:39 pm
HEIHEI22, Lakeside City, Texas
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This is the best song I've ever heard

HEIHEI22 said...
on Sep. 23 2021 at 12:39 pm
HEIHEI22, Lakeside City, Texas
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This is the best song I've ever heard

s402714 said...
on Sep. 14 2021 at 8:38 pm
s402714, Chandler, Arizona
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Nice song!

on Mar. 11 2021 at 2:34 pm
12376-astravo SILVER, Centennial, Colorado
6 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
" A writer is a writer not because she writes well and easily, because she has amazing talent, or because everything she does is golden. A writer is a writer because, even though there is no hope, even when nothing you do shows any sign of promise, you keep writing anyway." - Junot Diaz

" Overnight Success is almost a myth. Half of this industry is luck, and half is the refusal to quit" - Victoria Schwab

I loved this. It was amazing. I honestly think you have a very promising future in the path of music. And this was your first song? Girl, you are a natural and you have talent. You should totally make this into a video so we can hear it with the intended music. It was a - maz - zing!!!!!!!

BookWorm2007 said...
on Dec. 24 2020 at 10:43 pm
BookWorm2007, Wayne, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, hide all evidence of your failure."

I love this song! Ugh, I wish I had it on a Spotify playlist. I hope you have a happy holiday season.

Javeyah said...
on Oct. 27 2020 at 11:43 am
Javeyah, Rockford, Illinois
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BRooooo i love this. Its so cute and just makes me feel all warm. Ughh i needed thiss.

lilla said...
on Apr. 20 2020 at 8:17 pm
lilla, Irving, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"[M]aybe goodness isn't the absence of bad thoughts or impulses, but the conscious choice to behave according to your moral ideals in spite of them."
-Unkown

I am interested to see what this sounds like with the intended music

on Feb. 27 2020 at 7:50 pm
zoe_vaughn BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
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This is great, thank you so much. I love how the words flow so smoothly and could go with pretty much any melody

on Feb. 27 2020 at 7:50 pm
zoe_vaughn BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
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This is great, thank you so much. I love how the words flow so smoothly and could go with pretty much any melody

on Jan. 6 2020 at 7:46 pm
Latte_Lover21, Wyckoff, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
'Remember, amateurs built the Arc. Professionals built the Titanic.'

This was beautiful and inspiring. I can really feel how you expressed yourself, and as a songwriter myself, I think this is an amazing piece of work. Well done, keep it up! I want more! I love how you're not afraid to express the positivism. Whether you believe in the Father or not, He'll always be there! Amazing work!

on Dec. 13 2019 at 11:56 am
Goku_Nativeson, Ogema, Minnesota
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noice very noice

on Oct. 11 2019 at 3:49 am
jennynyitya2005, Juru, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life doesn't happen to you, you happen to Life...

this is good...

opal06 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 2 2019 at 6:03 pm
opal06 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"there is both light and dark inside of us, what matters is the part we choose to on, that's who we really are."
-Sirius Black

this is very good! when i read this i started coming up with a tune to it, and the lyrics were easy to find a tune that sounded good!

on Jan. 31 2019 at 8:40 pm
Kittensdamittens SILVER, York, Pennsylvania
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I enjoy how it seems kind of aggressive