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this is the final war
the earth will be no more
angels vs demons and humans too
this war is for me and for you

its time for judgement
whos side are you with
are you with the angels in the sky
or deep below in hells eternal fire

the sky grows dark
the war begins
it will all end
with the death of the lord or the master of shadows

now you choose which way to go
stay and fight or run away
i choose to stay
and live another day

the end
yeah the end................is near





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IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 10:56 pm
Nice! Good job! Ps. Pleaz read rate and comment on my work!
 
flawless200 said...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 10:40 am
I love and even if you dont see a meaning in it i do
 
David.DZE said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 1:41 pm
This song can have many meanings. Some are good and some have "destruction" written all over them.  Great song. Just try to also convey your meaning a little stronger.
 
uncaring-unknowing-unthinking replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 1:36 am
there is no true meaning to this song
 
karash10397 said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 12:17 pm
this is amazing it has  a really nice meaning!! 
 
bbygurl21 said...
Aug. 30, 2010 at 5:09 pm
i like this i am going 2 give u 5 stars
 
agypup said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 7:29 pm
I was really hurt because me and my two bff got in a fight and I'm up against them so this song really touched me. thank you
 
bere said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 7:42 am
wow nice its really good it got uratention when u even strart reading and yea its true what it says
 
LiLDemon13 said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 7:03 pm
I like this alot but i think its more about choseing to belive in god or not
 
Cady_ said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 2:07 am
You know, I like this piece but my problem is I don't believe in choosing sides or war, but I do apprieciate the people fighting the war...I know it's a song about choosing sides, and it is great, but if i really hadto choose, I would go with werever god puts me...FIVE STARS>>cady
 
uncaring-unknowing-unthinking replied...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 5:56 pm
its not really about choosing sides its about choosing to fight or to run
 
spongegurl_369 said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 10:59 am
wow that was amazing. it touched me and it true the end is near even thou some don't see it
 
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